A review by olliesbooknook2_0
Breathless by Dean Koontz

3.0

Alright so it's better than the previous book I read (both by him and in general), ik it is his whole thing but less POVs would have made this so much better!! Honestly I would have been so much happier with a story following only Grady and Cammy! Henry's plotline could've made a great short story but I feel really disconnected from most of the other perspectives because of how little development there was between 6+ stories that intertwine (barely) in a 350 page book! Which is really unfortunate because I genuinely wanted to see the development between Grady and Cammy but it was bare bones at best! Loved the creature designs though, I sketched them out because I just adored it. Overall, meh at best, lots of things that could easily be enhanced, many things needed to be cut or expanded on, extremely abrupt ending (I mean going 45 mph and hitting a wall abrupt). I'm not mad, just disappointed.