A review by secretbadass
The Unincorporated War by Eytan Kollin, Dani Kollin

Did not finish book. Stopped at 62%.
Ugh... I tried. I really wanted to like it. I read the first book and liked it enough to read the sequel and was planning on reading the next two... at first. But I gotta be done. DNF at 60%

The writing is SO bland! There's just too much pointless detail. And the characters are like cardboard. No one is very likeable and there are no endearing moments that make you root for anyone. The only interesting character is mostly used for battle scenes without really delving into who she is. Additionally, the MC from the first book has not only become boring and uninteresting but has lost any fire he had from the first book and just seems depressed. 

The two leaders of the fighting factions just give speeches as their main form of dialogue and has become predictable and tedious. I found myself rolling my eyes the second giving a speech was mentioned. They're written as the strategic battle masters but every time they outwitted each other I just thought, "well of course, this is the same way every battle has happened", it wasn't shocking or exciting. It's unpredictability was predictable. 

I could say more but seeing that these books aren't interacted with much I'll leave it at that. 

Time to move on.