A review by claredragonfly
Amortals by Matt Forbeck

3.0

Two and a half stars. One of the big mysteries took over two hundred pages--maybe closer to two hundred and fifty--between me figuring out and the main character figuring it out/having it revealed to him. Some parts were really exciting, but most of the villains weren't believable to me. I actually think this would have worked better as a movie--I kept thinking that a good actor could sell me the lines, even if the writer couldn't. The ending was very abrupt, with no perceptible denouement.