A review by dee_reading
The Henchmen's Book Club by Danny King

2.0

The concept was really interesting and I enjoyed the story, but it was largely let down by the fact that it read like an early draft. Needs a really good edit and proofread, not only are there spelling mistakes, but a heap of grammatical errors, and whole paragraphs I would have completely rewritten to flow better.

The author needs to learn the art of 'show, don't tell'.