A review by lassarina
Slave by Cheryl Brooks

Did not finish book.

I wanted to enjoy this book. It's full of things that ought to be my catnip - sci-fi erotica! Dangerous roleplay adventures to rescue one's sister! And yet by 10% I was reading about one sentence per paragraph, and at 20% I realized I wasn't missing anything in doing so, so I walked away. There is So. Damn. Much. Telling. Infodump worldbuilding everywhere! The heroine can't decide what she's doing or thinking! She can't be bothered to call the hero by his actual name! She's apparently a complete idiot despite supposedly being a super successful trader! But seriously, if I can read a sentence per paragraph and not be missing anything important, the book is yammering too much, and I'm so done.