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Little Girls by Nicholas Aflleje
2.0
adventurous dark mysterious fast-paced

Maybe it's to show something that's unspoken or off the page, but it reads more thoughtless or stereotyping to me. For example, Lilt is called a tomboy by Mehret, one of the mean girls at school. Lielet says it's because Mehret has developed boobs. But in a later scene we see Lielet with her brother. They are drawn so similarly that it's hard to tell them apart. The story itself was just okay . I think I would have appreciated it a bit more if the myth of Kerit was actually told. I know that she is supposed to be scary, but she came across more as annoying.