caramay 's review for:

The Shining Wall by Melissa Ferguson

DNF @ 25%

Characters didn’t feel fully fleshed out or believable.

The connections (or possible future connections) between the characters seemed hinky or not plausible.

The plot either too slow or non existent.

Pacing was just off the mark.

The world in this story and how it came to be not a really explained or written in a way early on that it’s understood early on.

Whatever conflict was going on I didn’t really understand - how/why/what/who etc.

Felt no compulsion to pick up and read it.