A review by popthebutterfly
Beyond the Ruby Veil by Mara Fitzgerald

3.0

Disclaimer: I received this ebook from the publisher for Rockstar Book Tours. Thanks! All opinons are my own.

Book: Beyond the Ruby Veil

Author: Mara Fitzgerald

Book Series: Beyond the Ruby Veil Book 1

Rating: 3/5

Recommended For...: fantasy, revenge, romance, bully like romance

Publication Date: October 13, 2020

Publisher: Little, Brown Books for Young Readers

Pages: 288

Recommended Age: 16+ (romance, sexual content, violence, gore, death, torture)

Synopsis: Cunning and unapologetic, Emanuela Ragno is a socialite who plays by her own rules. In her most ambitious move yet, she’s about to marry Alessandro Morandi, her childhood best friend and the heir to the wealthiest house in Occhia. Emanuela doesn’t care that she and her groom are both gay, because she doesn’t want a love match. She wants power, and through Ale, she’ll have it all.

But Emanuela has a secret that could shatter her plans. In her city of Occhia, the only source of water is the watercrea, a mysterious being who uses magic to make water from blood. When their first bruise-like omen appears on their skin, all Occhians must surrender themselves to the watercrea to be drained of life. Everyone throughout history has obeyed this law for the greater good. Everyone except Emanuela. She’s kept the tiny omen on her hip out of sight for years.

When the watercrea exposes Emanuela during her wedding ceremony and takes her to be sacrificed, Emanuela fights back…and kills her. Before everyone in Occhia dies of thirst, Emanuela and Ale must travel through the mysterious, blood-red veil that surrounds their city to uncover the source of the watercrea’s power and save their people—no matter what it takes.

Review: For the most part I liked this book. It was a fun, short read that kept me on my toes. The book is great for people who want something fast to get through in one sitting and the plot kept me intrigued from start to finish.

However, there were a ton of problems with this book. The book is way too fast paced and by 15% in I had already reached what should have been the climax of the book. The book is also confusing and spends very little time on developing the story. Nothing is explained outright and the reader is left to guess. The book also had very little world building and the character development was non-existent.

Verdict: It was good and I liked it, but there’s some problems.