A review by georgiewhoissarahdrew
Carved In Stone by Donna McDonald

1.0

I wanted to like this, I really did. Nice concept - older love, reasonable background set-up. But, oh, the dialogue - clunky, clunky, clunky. Please lighten it up - fewer complete sentences, maybe; a bit more differentiation in characters' vocabulary? And stop telling me all the time what people are thinking. There really is a decent book in there, but I didn't have the energy to carve it out of the granite writing.