A review by macthekat
Upgraded by Neil Clarke

3.0

a hunting story about humans... and how it isn't machine parts that take away their humanity but their actions. beautiful imagery and bizarre word pictures. a bit confusing because of the compressed form but that is part of the charm of reading short fiction

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A captivating story about a miner with no hope in a situation where she has no hope of getting out until she do.

It's quite a short story but it manages to build a world that you feel you know how it is working. You understand the protagonist and care for her. I just realised that I am not sure of the protagonist's gender - she felt female to me, but what do I know?

I do however think the Uncanny Magazine has spoiled me - I expect more emotional punch from the short stories I read.

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Not a fan of second person, but dark and hunting. I ended up caring, not about the protagonist but about the plot and the world. Neat trick in that short a story

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Interesting story of memory and identity. If I had to rate it I think I would land on 3 stars. It kept me interested, but not terribly emotionally invested

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Blah, that ended before it really got interesting. more like the start of a story, than a story.