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#DNF 8%
I made it through one chapter and honestly that was forced. I almost gave up halfway through the second page and my opinion didn't change between there and the end of the chapter. The idea here looks interesting. The writing is a disaster, with frequent and sudden head hopping; whip-fast, unrealistic sweeps of emotion; and a distinct lack of editing. The editing issue is what really did it for me.
I made it through one chapter and honestly that was forced. I almost gave up halfway through the second page and my opinion didn't change between there and the end of the chapter. The idea here looks interesting. The writing is a disaster, with frequent and sudden head hopping; whip-fast, unrealistic sweeps of emotion; and a distinct lack of editing. The editing issue is what really did it for me.
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