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mrs_antisocial1's review
1.0
I was intrigued by the storyline for the main character through the first few chapters until numerous problems started to show themselves.
1. The writing is just sloppy. Fire your editor and hire a new one. There should not have been that many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes in a finished copy.
2. The storyline had ADHD - One moment you are wrapped up in the heroine, the next it randomly jumps to one of the princes, then there is smut, then it's back to angsty teenage stuff. It's like the authors had trouble picking and sticking to a genre.
3. Huge holes in the story. Time just disappears... and the ending?
This was an interesting first draft of what could be a great YA series if its sent back to the drawing board and the story has some more meat to it.
1. The writing is just sloppy. Fire your editor and hire a new one. There should not have been that many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes in a finished copy.
2. The storyline had ADHD - One moment you are wrapped up in the heroine, the next it randomly jumps to one of the princes, then there is smut, then it's back to angsty teenage stuff. It's like the authors had trouble picking and sticking to a genre.
3. Huge holes in the story. Time just disappears... and the ending?
This was an interesting first draft of what could be a great YA series if its sent back to the drawing board and the story has some more meat to it.
doodlewinger's review against another edition
4.0
This book was a good start to a new series. Celeste is the one person who can stop the evil jasper but she has been held captive for the last 11 years and has no idea what to do. She will be a great mc and her men will be interesting to watch as well.
savyjewell's review against another edition
5.0
Wonderful
I really enjoyed this book. I loved the concept of the court and how it was decided who was in the court. This is the perfect start of a series. It laid out the perfect foundation for an intriguing series.
The only thing I didn’t like was that it ended too soon. I was at like 83% (says my kindle) into it when the book was over.
I really enjoyed this book. I loved the concept of the court and how it was decided who was in the court. This is the perfect start of a series. It laid out the perfect foundation for an intriguing series.
The only thing I didn’t like was that it ended too soon. I was at like 83% (says my kindle) into it when the book was over.
tessa_hamberlin's review
2.0
Far too confusing. I got about halfway and then decided to call it quits.
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