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Missing Pieces by Ray Daley

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3.0

I wasn't sure about this story at first. there's a lot left unsaid that made it slightly difficult for me to get into what was happening, as much as I'd have liked, but later on more was revealed to help my overall understanding.

This story takes place in the (possibly near) future, though it was hard to confirm that at first. I felt it crucial to my reading for me to know this to better understand some of what's said.

Despite that, I think the main theme of the story is fairly upfront and strong. If the writing was only slightly less vague, I think I'd have enjoyed the story that much more.
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