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sarah984's review
emotional
funny
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.0
I feel bad rating this so low because I really appreciate some of what the author was trying to do but I just did not enjoy it.
Neither the original quest (told via flashbacks that are inexplicably in first person) nor the new quest are very interesting. The romance is bland - they have a few fun moments but I have no clue why they loved each other aside from being the only teens on a life or death quest. There is SO MUCH boring exposition and every problem is solved via ridiculously convenient circumstances with basically zero effort so despite the life and death circumstances the stakes feel low. The characters are diverse but very superficially written. I feel like I know more about their hair care routines than their personalities, and some of the "diversity" is extremely clunky (the weird mention of cultural appropriation that makes it unclear whether the character/author actually understands why it is bad, a character struggling to recall the word 'bisexual' and then immediately explaining its etymology, the non-Muslim Muslim, the way the trans and aroace characters are described). Also this is oddly specific but this is the second fantasy novel I have read where a lesbian character facing an arranged marriage to a man wishes she were bi instead and that is so weirdly insulting?? Like just because she's attracted to men doesn't mean she would be into whichever one she was forced to marry?
TL;dr: I was expecting an epic fantasy and got a mediocre YA romance instead.
Neither the original quest (told via flashbacks that are inexplicably in first person) nor the new quest are very interesting. The romance is bland - they have a few fun moments but I have no clue why they loved each other aside from being the only teens on a life or death quest. There is SO MUCH boring exposition and every problem is solved via ridiculously convenient circumstances with basically zero effort so despite the life and death circumstances the stakes feel low. The characters are diverse but very superficially written. I feel like I know more about their hair care routines than their personalities, and some of the "diversity" is extremely clunky (the weird mention of cultural appropriation that makes it unclear whether the character/author actually understands why it is bad, a character struggling to recall the word 'bisexual' and then immediately explaining its etymology, the non-Muslim Muslim, the way the trans and aroace characters are described). Also this is oddly specific but this is the second fantasy novel I have read where a lesbian character facing an arranged marriage to a man wishes she were bi instead and that is so weirdly insulting?? Like just because she's attracted to men doesn't mean she would be into whichever one she was forced to marry?
TL;dr: I was expecting an epic fantasy and got a mediocre YA romance instead.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Violence
Moderate: Confinement, Death, Death of parent, Terminal illness, Sexual content, and Medical content
Minor: Infidelity
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