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Electrify Me by Bibi Rizer

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5.0

This little number was page turning good. After many years of bad New Year’s Eve and New Years, Gloria decides to try something different and work a suicide hotline. The Lights go out and Charlie comes to assess the situation. After finding that it would take more than his tools to fix, he asks Gloria to take a ride with him while he waits on calls. Driving up in a drug house, he phones the police, causing on of the dealers to confront them.

After some handy foreplay (pun fully intended), they head to the drugstore for condoms since their hands didn’t get the job done. The dealer from the drug house jumps in the truck, with Gloria in it, and drives off. Charlie jumps through hoops to find her and when he does, at another drug house, he cuts the power, knocks out the dealer, and gives it to Gloria from the back on a table. I was floored that they couldn’t wait until they got out of the house and not surprised that the police showed up, almost catching them in a compromising position, although they kind of were, being that they were in a drug house and by the looks of things, the police thought he raped her and she tried to escape.

The story ended in a high note, back at Gloria’s apartment with a steamy shower, a little oral and much needed sleep. So much in such a short story, I would definitely call it a quickie! Thanks Bibi!
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