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Magic on the Storm by Devon Monk

kathydavie's review

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3.0

Fourth in the Allie Beckstrom urban fantasy series and revolving around Allie, a Hound who can scent magic, and her friends.

My Take
I do enjoy Shamus' cheekiness! At the other end of the spectrum is that father of hers! He definitely wins the A-hole of the Year award. Sometimes you imagine that he actually does love Allie, but then you discover in the next breath that he loves her as long as he can use her for his own ends. And Jingo Jingo is lying to the Authority about her father possessing Allie. It does not bode well.

Whoa, well, we find out what happened to Anthony. After his betrayal in Magic in the Blood, 2, I didn't expect to hear from that little jerk again. It doesn't help that Violet has bad news for Allie. And Allie learns who murdered her father.

I do like that Allie is such a firm person. It's her way or you can leave. I don't, however, like it when she carries that attitude everywhere. Especially into areas about which she knows so little. It's veering into the I-know-everything trope. She's never hunted before, but insists on going even though the stakes are so high and she's clueless about the weapons.
"How come I had to be the one to fix everything? How come I had to be the hero? I sure as hell didn't feel like a hero." (No, she sounds more like a selfish, whiny bitch.)

Well, Allie finally gets her wish. To be the center of everything. And she wants to run. All of a sudden, she falls back on the I-know-nothing card. Hypocrite much?

I get that Alllie doesn't trust her dad, but she has to trust in his knowledge and skill somewhat. It pisses me off that she automatically refuses to at least think about what her dad is saying. Yeah, I agree with Allie. She could never have held the Illusion focus, as she's too scattered. It seems as if, every time there's a battle of some sort, she can't make up her mind where to go, who to help, what to do. She wants to be in the thick of it all the time, but she's useless most of the time. Can you tell how much I dislike her?

We get the story on why Shame hates being around Terric so much.

Why is it that no one else seems to feel the tension? At least, Monk never tells or shows that anyone else is aware of it. They must be aware of it, but no one says anything. They all simply accept that they must blindly follow their leader.

It gets so tense at the end, I couldn't read fast enough. So much is happening, so much set-up for Magic at the Gate.

It's a frustrating series. The premise is intriguing, and I like some of the characters. God knows, the mystery behind it all certainly pulls me in. But God save me from Allie!

The Story
A wild magic storm is coming and Allie feels the power in the magic wells. Only she feels it being drained away.

The Characters
Allie Beckstrom Hounds illegal spells for Detective Stotts, by night she works for the Authority. Her father was Daniel Beckstrom, an extremely powerful magic user, who was murdered. Events in Magic in the Blood, 2, gave him the chance to possess Allie. Now he shares her mind and sometimes takes over her body. Kevin Cooper is with the Authority and a powerful magic user; he's also the pregnant Violet Beckstrom's bodyguard. And secretly in love with her. A fact that her dead husband is furious about. Stone is a stone gargoyle that Allie brought to life, an Animate. Now he lives with her and stacks things for fun. He makes an excellent bodyguard as well. Nola is a non-magic user and Allie's best friend. Only she lives on a farm 300 miles away in a magic-free zone. She's seeing Stotts. Cody Miller, the Hand who had been involved in Daniel's death, is now living with Nola.

Zayvion Jones is Allie's Soul Complement. He's a Closer — all Zen smooth and deadly — and the Guardian of the Gates using all magics.

The Authority is…
…the secretive underground magic organization that polices all magic users, except they all seem to be at odds with each other.

The Portland Authority
Shamus Flynn uses Death magic and supposedly washes dishes at his mum's restaurant. His mother, Maeve Flynn, runs Feile San Fhomeher (restaurant and inn) and uses Blood magic. She's also one of the Voices in the Authority along with Victor who is Zay's boss, head of the Closers, and uses Faith magic; Liddy Salberg who is another Death user and Jingo's boss; and, Sedra, their leader. Other members include Sunny, Ethan Katz who was Daniel's and now Allie's accountant, Carl and La who are twins; Jingo Jingo uses Death magic and is Shamus' boss; Dane Lannister is Sedra's bodyguard; and, Chase is another Closer, an ex-girlfriend of Zayvion's, and Greyson's Soul Complement. Allie hates Sedra's know-it-all, hate-everyone attitude.

The Seattle Authority
Terric is a Closer from Seattle — and Shamus' Soul Complement. A man Shame avoids even as he longs for him. Hayden Kellerman is another from Seattle, and he's staying with Maeve. Others include Pham, the Georgia girls, Darla who uses Death magic, Nick Pavloski and Joshua Romero are Closers using Faith magic, Mike Barham who thinks Daniel was a good man is Life magic, and Paige Iwamoto is Blood magic.

The Hounds are…
…magic users who can scent magic. They're employed by various people to track spells back to their source. They're also loners who endure too much pain because of all the magic they use, a pain they treat with drugs, alcohol, or self-abuse. Davy Silvers is Allie's secretary for the Pack. Blood magic happened to him in Magic in the Shadows, 3, and now he feels it when another Hound is hurting. Beatrice Lufkin and Jack Quinn are the only other active Hounds.

Tomi is the Hound Davy loves, who was broken in Magic in the Shadows and is now living with her grandmother in California.

Anthony Bell is a wanna-be Hound, a betrayer who got less than he deserved.

Portland PD
Detective Makani Love is partnered with Detective Lia Payne. Detective Stotts leads MERC. Julian, Roberts, and Garnet are part of Stotts' crew.

Grant runs Get Mugged, Allie's favorite coffeehouse. And her new landlord, for Allie has leased the old warehouse next door from him. She's fixing it up as a crash pad for her fellow Hounds.

Greyson is a Closer and a murderer. Allie thinks he got payback on that from his partner-in-crime, Frank Gordon. That Gordon turned on him and forced him into his half-man, half-beast form, a Necromorph.

Leander and Isabelle are a folktale, a true one. They were Soul Complements who got too deep into each other. So deep they tore the world apart. For this, they were separated. Kathy is one of the waitresses at Maeve's inn. Mama Rositto was the restaurant owner in Magic to the Bone, 1, whose son had almost died.

A wild magic storm is "violent and deadly, and will mess with the flow of magic that powers the city's spells". They're part of why the Beckstrom Storm Rods are essential for every householder and building owner. Violet and Daniel invented magic disks that can hold magic and not require the user to endure the pain of using them. Oopsies. Dr. Frank Gordon was the guy who dug up Allie's father and tried to kill Allie in Magic in the Blood.

Closers can take people's (and Hounds') memories away. Grounding is a very high level skill that requires the user act as a lightning rod for someone else. Disbursement is a spell magic users cast to choose how to pay for using their magic. Allie turns it into colds, flu, aches, and pains and more. A Proxy is the alternative to a Disbursement. A magic user sends the pain to them instead of having to endure it themselves. Soul Complements share magic, combining it to be even more powerful. The negatives, however, are also tremendous. If they go too far, they forget who they are as individuals and go insane. Death magic transfers life energy into magic.

The Cover and Title
The cover is dark, a storm of determined rain and crackles of lightning battering Allie and a tall building, its windows shining in the dark with glowing runes circling around the tattooed Allie in her cropped black tank top and jeans, creating an irregular halo of light. She's in profile to us, looking over her right arm with a katana over her far shoulder, and it looks as if she's getting ready to swing.

The title is more hopeful than reflective as it's more "in the storm" than "on". Then again the Magic on the Storm could be a reference to the battle that breaks out.

jesslynh's review

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4.0

Only thing I didn't like was the big, fat, cheat of a cliffhanger. Thank goodness the series is complete or I'd be really irritated. You all know how I hate cliffhangers--rely on your story to bring the reader back, please!

pixip's review

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5.0

The series finally came into it's stride during this book I didn't want to put it down for a minute which is damn hard during a work day lol Allie came up against even more this time and boy did she come out on top. The end of the book leads straight into the next and had me reaching for it straight away.

nuttkayc's review

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4.0

How dare it just end, just end. Not fair. Good thing I have the next book.

mamap's review

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2.0

deteriorating story line, sex

amibunk's review

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3.0

While I enjoy the world building in this series, I often get confused about who is an enemy and who is a good guy. Not only that but there are lots of loose ends floating around. I hope some answers are given in the next series, because I'm pretty tired of being kept in the dark.

maferg01's review

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5.0

Oh my gosh this is the best book in the series so far. I can't wait for the next in the series this fall. I need to know what happens next! This story was one action packed scene after another. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

git_r_read's review

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5.0

Below is my review from a couple of years ago. It still stands. I heartily recommend this author, book and series.
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Such a superb series. I've not read or listened to these in any order, but it doesn't overly matter. I guess there could be some spoilers, but it wasn't a huge deal to me.
Allie lives in a difficult world to navigate. She has magic inside her, she utilizes magic, but it comes at a cost. She needs to offset the use as it causes pain of sorts. She can make it affect her later where others use proxies to take the pain. She also has to keep a journal for her day-to-day activities as sometimes her memory disappears for various reasons.
She has friends and coworkers who know some of what she is but not all and she has to be careful what she says. A little like being a spy I imagine.
I love the characters Allie interacts with, magical and otherwise, good and not-so-good. Some are definitely questionable of which side they are on. Some are drawn to it and some are forced against their will.
And the magical bureaucracy...The Authority...lordy...the hoops Allie has to jump through! All in all, though, awesome story.
Definite recommend.

lynseyisreading's review

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3.0

This was an okay instalment. The first three quarters of the book were pretty average but the end was a great climatic scene. Be warned it has one stinker of a cliffhanger. You're going to want to have the next one in hand.

To be honest, if it were not for nearly every book so far ending in some kind of cliffhanger, I might have walked away from this series by now. There's nothing wrong with it, exactly, but it doesn't rock my world by any stretch of the imagination. This cliffhanger ploy is something that's definitely starting to aggravate.

Allie's character still isn't the badass I want her to be. For someone that has the unique ability to channel as much magic as she wants you'd think she'd be more helpful in a crisis, but as far as I can tell, whenever there's a dangerous situation, Allie is more of a liability than anything else. She either just rushes in half cocked and gets in the way, or she has a Too Stupid To Live moment and makes everything worse.

The romance element is still only luke warm for me, too, but its definitely better in this book. It's nice to see Zayvion training Allie to better defend herself. This should help with the above.

The most interesting thing at the moment for me is the subplot between Shane, the lovable, if slightly annoying, Irish rogue, and a blast from his past that turns up by the name of Terric. There is some question as to whether or not the two are soul complements. Something that both are uncomfortable with as it usually is something that that happens between a male and female pair and can be a highly pleasurable thing to experience during sex. So for two straight guys? Well they react pretty much as you'd expect them to react. They try and out-man each other and piss each other off as much as possible rather than deal with it like a grown up.

I am going to read the next one ('cause of the dang blasted cliffhanger) but it's with reservation. I really hope for an improvement in this series, or I'm out.

triciareader2's review

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Fun, fast realistic fantasy read