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Oculus: Poems by Sally Wen Mao

brimnms's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional mysterious reflective medium-paced

5.0

courtneyfalling's review against another edition

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reflective fast-paced

3.5

I liked the persona poems of Anna May Wong most. Some of the other poems about technology and surveillance fell a little flat for me: I wanted them to push a little further or situate the speaker's life amidst the world a little more in most cases. 

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lsparrow's review against another edition

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1.0

I just could not get into these poems. I think the concept of these poems was interesting but I did not have enough background knowledge to really connect with the poems.

khuizenga's review against another edition

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4.0

I will admit, there was a lot here that went right over my head, but what I did get was amazing. Her use of fragmented imagery kept me on my toes and painted a surrealist dreamscape in my head filled with history, representation, and digital surveillance. These poems weren’t always the easiest for me to connect to, but Sally Wen Mao’s skill is evident.

whosthehereticnow's review against another edition

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4.0

4.5 stars: love the interactions with anime, techno-orientalism, the Western gaze, and colonial fetishization (the minus .5 stars is because I had to read it too fast and didn't get to digest it enough; to be revised upon reread)

townsendme's review against another edition

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5.0

This opened my mind to what poetry can be about and do. Disquieting and delightful!

percystjoan's review against another edition

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4.0

absolutely fantastic flow to these poems, they were a delight to read because of how perfectly constructed they were? but also at the same time they were hard to read because a lot of them were just so brutal in the best way

anna may wong blows out sixteen candles

when i was sixteen, i modeled fur coats for a furrier.
white men gazed down my neck like wolves

but my mink collar protected me. when i was sixteen,
i was an extra in a tale of two worlds. if i didn't pour

someone's tea, then i was someone's wife. every brother,
father, or husband of mine was nefarious. they held me

at knifepoint, my neck in a chokehold. if they didn't murder
me, i died of an opium overdose. now it's 1984

and another white girl awaits her sweet sixteen. it's 1984
and another white girl angsts about a jock who kisses

her at the end of the film. now it's 1984 and long
duk dong is the white girl's houseguest. he dances,

drunk, agog with gong sounds. all around the nation,
teens still taunt us. hallways bloat with sweaters, slurs

when i was eight, the boy who sat behind me brought pins
to class. "do asians feel pain the way we do?" he'd ask.

he'd stick the needles to the back of my neck until i winced.
i wore six wool coats so i wouldn't feel the sting. it's 1984

so cast me in a new role already. cast me as a pothead,
an heiress, a gymnast, a queen. cast me as a castaway in a city

without shores. cast me as that girl who rivets center stage
or cast me away, into the blue where my lips don't touch

or say. if i take my time machine back to sixteen, or twenty,
or eight, i'd blow out all my candles. sixteen wishes

extinguish and burn. the boy will never kiss me at the end
of the movie. the boy will only touch me with his needles.

gduran's review against another edition

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5.0

I can see again after reading this book.

windbreak's review against another edition

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3.5

i think i would have enjoyed the poems after reading the notes first . 

aaron_j136's review against another edition

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4.0

Darlings, let’s rewrite
the script.
Let’s hijack the narrative, steer
the story ourselves. There’d be a heist, a battle.


this was a remarkable poetry collection! :)