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Imperfect Spiral by Debbie Levy

nicole_litwin's review

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5.0

I loved this book. It is definitely not the type of book I usually read but I'm glad I decided to read it. It was slow moving but I liked the plot and the characters. The ending was also well written.

kelleemoye's review

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4.0

:-(

mhfarmer's review

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5.0

I received this advanced copy from the publisher at the TLA Annual Conference. For teens who enjoy realistic fiction "problem novels," this book is now at the top of my list. The characterization is spot on, the unlikely friendship between Danielle and Humphrey is well-developed, and the plot has enough twists to engage most readers. I cried A LOT while reading it, mostly because Levy captured incredibly well the spirit of a smart, sensitive, five year old boy. Danielle's memories of Humphrey are often funny and so bittersweet, and show how "highly interesting" she is to have become better friends with a little boy than those her own age. As another reviewer said, the immigration issue is woven into the plot so that it isn't distracting, and it adds a nice sociopolitical layer to the story.

*Bonus: there are lots of great vocabulary words for high schoolers (like polemics, precipitating, perambulating, and other fun "p-words").

lorathelibrarian's review

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3.0

This was a sweet story. One that I will remember, but not forever. And it's definitely something to recommend to younger kids because it's a "gentle" read...nothing too crazy or inappropriate happens. The main character is a sophomore in high school so it is a YA for sure.

readingundertheradar's review

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4.0

I'm giving away an ARC of this right here : http://www.happybookloversblog.com/2013/07/blog-tour-imperfect-spiral.html

Levy tackled the process of grief and tragedy so well. I was amazed at how deep this book went into Danielle's summer and dealing with the loss of Humphrey, as well as battling through all the town's feelings and opinions on the matter. The book begins about 40 seconds after the accident, with Danielle experiencing everything as if it's in slow motion. From there, we see her life after the accident mixed with chapters of her adventures with Humphrey before he died.

And let me just say, what an interesting kid. He was one of those children that was totally believable as a child, but at the same time, he posed interesting questions to Danielle and always wanted to learn more and grow (all while running around an imaginary place called Thrumble-Boo). He helped her make realizations about her own life and growing up even though he was only 5.

Not only does Levy write a story about grief, she also weaves it in with the "life around you goes on" sort of theme. While Danielle just wants someone to ask her about the darling child she knew, the town is in an outrage because the driver was an illegal alien. So now, on top of grieving, Danielle is receiving phone calls and is asked to be interviewed on her opinions on illegal immigrants, and whether or not she thinks it would have saved Humphrey's life if the town had done anything about it. She handles the situation well, trying to avoid the nosy townsfolk as best she can.

It was a pretty predictable book, but not in a bad way. I knew Danielle was eventually going to come to some sort of terms with her grief and with Humphrey's memory, but I wasn't sure how. This was a genuinely lovely book about sadness and moving on. And the cover art goes so perfectly with the story, I truly love it.

Read When: You want to break out of the traditional beach summer novel and are ready for a little seriousness and sweetness.

lifeinmybook's review

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5.0

This book was so sweet & incredible! I loved it sooo much! Thanks Joelle for the recommendation!

thehodgenator's review

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5.0

This book made me feel all kinds of feelings.

As the novel opens, Humphrey has been lost to a terrible accident while walking home with his babysitter Danielle. And while this should have been a novel about how to deal and recover, it turned into something else toward the end.

While some may have a problem with that, I did not. Here’s why: when a tragedy happens, people are always looking beyond the tragedy itself for self gain (whether personally, professionally, politically, etc.). That is what happens in the novel. We shift from the loss of Humphrey to why we need stronger immigration laws.

I felt that this shift mirrored a truth in our society—and why we need to keep our eye on the true victim. In this case, it isn’t America with illegal immigrants; it is five-year-old Humphrey. He is getting lost in the accident, and Danielle works to make sure his not forgotten and overshadowed.

Oh Danielle, talk about a heart-breaker. This character absolutely melts my heart. She has a good head on her shoulders, but she feels lost. Humphrey is dead, on her watch, and she doesn’t know how to move forward. To mirror this, the author gives us flashbacks into their relationship, from the first day Danielle meets the quirky child until his last moments. Okay, where is my towel?!

You can read my full review on my blog.

katiegrrrl's review

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4.0

Slow story but very touching.

library_brandy's review

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4.0

Danielle loves her summer job babysitting 5-year-old Humphrey. Humphrey is a fantastic kid, and the two of them have an unusual, but strong, friendship. But Danielle's summer job comes to an abrupt stop when Humphrey runs into the path of an oncoming car, chasing after a ball. His death weighs heavily on Danielle, who feels guilty for the accident and alone in her grief: how can she explain to anyone what Humphrey meant to her? Meanwhile, the town is using the accident to push for safety improvements along the road as well as legislation against undocumented immigrants, as one was driving the car that struck Humphrey.

A realistic portrait of friendship and grief, as well as outsiders' response to an incident to further their own political agendas. Discussion of real issues never overshadows the plot, but is woven in to become a part of the story. Side characters are developed and each has their own issues to deal with; the rest of the world doesn't stop because Danielle's world did.

Good relationships with siblings and parents, and the growing understanding of her own friendships.

audreylee's review

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4.0

Well, this was more than a little devastating. A look at the aftermath of a tragic accident and the grief and guilt that becomes part of a young girl's life. There is also a searing look into the "blame game" played after accidents and looking for someone "other" to pin things on. This was recommended to me by a teen reader and it was worth my evening.