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The Rancher's Second Chance by Victoria James

yesididbringabook's review against another edition

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2.0

it should tell you something that there's more than one book titled "The Rancher's Second Chance." This book was meh. Not a huge fan of Mel. And towards the end, it starts to get really cliche and obvious.

And, spoiler alert,


Dear Cole:

Obviously if she's super freaked about her dad and won't talk to any of her family, there was abuse! I mean how clear does it need to be? Never mind, apparently her dad has to grab her in front of you. You're really dumb.

Sincerely,
A Disappointed Reader

jasmyn9's review against another edition

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4.0

These books can be read as stand alones - the characters do not cross over for more than a couple paragraphs in passing.

This book is about more than just one man's second chance - it's about a second chance for both Cole and Melanie, just in drastically different ways. Cole is grump and short and doesn't seem to like anything since his wife died several years ago. Even though he promised her to move on, he never really has. He is determined to see the ranch succeed and doesn't need some high society girl like Melanie to help him do it.

Melanie is not what she seems to most people. Coming from a incredibly wealthy family, most look at her and think "trust-fund kid". But she left that life far behind her for a variety of painful reasons that she chooses not to speak about - ever. She's now a struggling business owner just like most people in Passion Creek.

Melanie was hired by Cole's sister to plan her wedding - which has placed her in his path more than he really likes. Especially since there seems to be something special, different, about Melanie that he can't seem to wrap his mind around. This is the story of them trying to open up and heal each other's hearts - trying to find a way to move forward and past all the painful memories and moments that have been holding them back.

A very sweet story with some sass that Victoria James seems to enjoy spreading around - and I really appreciate her doing so. Some of the dialog about short people with blotchy faces was great (you'll know what I mean when you get there).

*This book was received in exchange for an honest review*

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moniqueeditrix's review against another edition

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5.0

Once again Victoria James had me all mushy. Full review to come.

jemifraser's review against another edition

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This is the first book I've read by Victoria James but it won't be my last! Great story. I enjoyed the characters and the way their personal stories intertwined. Looking forward to more by this author!

thepurplefox's review against another edition

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Maybe I'm just in a bad mood but I seem to be picking up bad books. This reads worse than most of the unpublished FanFiction I've read. The writing is very stiff somehow and a bit awkward. I pretty much gave up after this bit:


Gage was nodding. “That’s great, man. I hope this works out for you.”
“It has, too,” Cole said.
Gage looked uncomfortable for a minute. “You know, if it doesn’t, that’s okay, too.”
"

"It has, too," ???????????? What kind of English is this? This is a published book?

Could not finish.

Edit:

I have decided to continue reading this because a) I'm hoping it gets better and b) I need something that won't distract me from my studies at this moment anyway.

However I shall also keep adding bits I find that are not well worded just to amuse myself.


Mrs. Harris looked visibly swelled with euphoria.


Edit 2:

That is me absolutely giving it up at about 50%. I need something not distracting during exams not something that makes me indignant.

elylibrarysec's review against another edition

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4.0

Rating: 4 1/2 stars
I was gifted a copy of this book from the publisher and author in exchange for an honest review. I was not compensated in any way.
Melanie Simms is a wedding consultant doing a favor for a friend. Cole Forrester owns a ranch. Almost from the beginning, Victoria has the reader laughing. So you will need to be careful if you have the munchies – you don’t want to choke. It’s nice to have a romance where you can laugh at the characters – makes them seem more human.

If you love reading about a sexy brooding cowboy then this book is for you. Maybe you like to set the mood while you’re reading; wintertime is a perfect time of year to bundle up in your favorite throw/blanket, start a fire in the fireplace, and have a nice hot drink handy. How about a female character that’s not perfect but has the hots for someone she shouldn’t.

Not all families are picture perfect. Just remember, you can pick your friends but not family (and boy do I know that first hand). This story shows the reader how some men feel they have the right to treat the women around them any way they want to. But I applaud those that are strong enough to walk away. This is what makes this tale so real – Victoria’s characters seem so believable.

This author gives a good life lesson in this great romance – you don’t have to suffer alone. Don’t be afraid to find someone you can talk to or even ask for help. This book isn’t graphic but it allows the reader to be either sweet or erotic when filling in the blanks. And it’s one thing that keeps the reader engaged.

Personally, I feel that Victoria wrote the perfect happy ending – it shows that no matter how bad your situation may be, you deserve a chance at love. She also gives the reader hope that there’s also someone out their for them (unless you are already in a committed relationship). You can’t go wrong in adding this book to your library. If this is the first piece of work that you’ve read of Victoria’s, you may find that you will want to read something else of hers.

cheryls's review against another edition

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5.0

Cole Forrester's sister, Corrina, was getting married and her longtime friend, Melanie Simms, is the wedding planner. Corrina was away on business and ended up in the hospital the week before the wedding. Melanie was going to have to handle last minute details with the help of Cole, her long time crush. The more time they spent together, the closer they got. He never thought he would be attracted to anyone after losing his wife. He was definitely feeling something for his sisters friend. Melanie is in love with Cole but fears her secrets will not allow them to be together.

Great story! Melanie's secrets are heartbreaking. I love her courage to stand on her own despite her past. Feelings felt so real that you could almost reach out and touch them. The attraction between Mel and Cole is sizzling. Cole Forrester is one sexy cowboy! I can't wait to read more from this fantastic author.

I received a copy in exchange for an honest review.
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