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He Died with a Felafel in His Hand by John Birmingham

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3.0


Book Review of He Died with a Felafel in his Hand by John Birmingham

”Things get out of control all the time in share houses. It’s not just a matter of the rent slipping behind or the washing line piling up. People flip over the line. Way over.”

He died with a felafel in his hand. With this amazing blow of a line, John Birmingham opens this intriguing account of a young man’s journey across different rooms, in different places in Australia, shared with a diverse and intriguing set of characters. It is this sharing of common space, flats, houses, rooms, and the ensuing drama of living with other people that is at the centre of the narrative in this autobiographical novel. Autobiographical because many of the experiences in this novel are based on the author’s own. The details and stories included here though incredibly fictionalised are based in part on real accounts and true events in the author’s life and those of the people he encounters.

Where there are people in a common space, there are bound to be clashes and moments of drama, experiences worthy of remembering to talk about in the future as once-upon-a-time interesting tales, or to detail in a book such as this one. He died with a Felafel in his Hand encompasses these aspects, it is a record of the drama of shared living, an account of the interesting human moments in these encounters, and also a compilation of experiences and stories worthy of being shared, to be remembered and to be engaged by any an interested reader. And it’s the author’s aim to fulfill all these aspects, in the form of a multilayered novel, that makes this work simultaneously interesting and daring, bumpy and frustrating.

Like the punch of the opening line, the stories in this novel are quite involving and they never fail to lead one’s emotional range to its fullest. The diverse and almost innumerable array of characters is what gives this novel its dramatic edge. Every Melissa, Nina, Dirk, Tim, John, Sara, Kate, Jeffrey, Greg and Lisa, etcetera etcetera…every one of them has a story to tell, some role to play in this entire theatre of living or sharing or renting or surviving? This fiasco of convoluted characters and personalities is the motive force of this narrative and its chaos.

And the narrative is chaotic! I did wonder while reading the story/ies whether it was the characters and events that dictated this chaotic narrative. Or it was the author’s own chaos and choice that delivered a narrative of this form, just wiry and winded in an intriguing way that, however, grows increasingly frustrating and cumbersome as one progresses through the book.

The novel, and its narrative structure, is multilayered and does not follow a traditional plot structure. The book is driven by an overarching theme of roommates/house-sharing chronicles. There are interesting graphics in the book layered in interesting albeit also confusing ways. There’s no clear or straightforward plot. The main character does not really go anywhere much or develop to achieve a certain goal or fail at that or anything else. It’s all just moving around from different places meeting crazy people, some of whom are memorable and the others easily or by choice forgettable. Even the main characters – can’t even tell you who they are -easily fall into the shadows of the narrative. What remains in the reader’s mind is a narrator they cannot recognise, characters they cannot care to remember, and stories they cannot reconnect or recount to save their lives. What starts as an intriguing and unconventional reading experience becomes an increasingly disengaging and disenchanting one.

There is no doubt that John Birmingham is a writer of immense capability and skill. His writing is clear and delivers the spirit and emotive atmosphere of the scenes in this book impeccably. As in these lines, he manages to capture with a moving clarity the sometimes difficult moments of sharing and moving houses: ”That black wave of despair, unknown outside the desperate wee hours, swept down on me.” This line, weighty in its emotional intensity, is an impactful moment in a largely hilarious and freaky assortment of tales where the unsmiling moments may be lost in the chaos or overridden by the drama and exaggeration of the detail. Birmingham’s verbose sentences are as clear and descriptive as the simple, no word goes to waste, no dull moment. In telling of a crazy night out, he writes: ”We tried to get into an illegal casino, where the alcohol is free as long as you’re losing – the economics seem feasible when you’re drunk – but they wouldn’t have us because we weren’t wearing ties.” Another Birmingham description: ”I woke up on the floor next to Milo with the sun slanting in on me, mouth like a dry turd and heavy peak-hour traffic roaring by outside.” A treat for the senses!

It was for Birmingham’s beautifully descriptive writing that I completed the book, even as it was less inspiring in its late stages. It became another weird or bizarre story after another, again and again, over and over. However, the reader’s left wanting to continue, not for the details or any interesting development (there isn’t), but for how the story is told. Put another way, the stories do get cumbersome after a while, but the storytelling (style) doesn’t. Birmingham’s style is a success, does not lose its energy and impact, even as the structure and narrative sometimes falter.

Birmingham’s He Died with a Felafel in his Hand is a good attempt, daring in its structure and impressive in style. Anyone who’s interested in roommate chronicles, this book is for you. Even if you don’t finish it, it leaves a lasting impression – shared living is a trip, a rollercoaster!

Rating: 3/5 ⭐⭐⭐



saintpepper's review against another edition

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fast-paced

1.5

cwzw's review against another edition

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adventurous funny lighthearted fast-paced

3.5

Share housing never changes

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msjacquip's review against another edition

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funny informative lighthearted fast-paced

3.0

This book is filled with stories about John’s experiences living in share houses in Australia.

The stories are quite funny but as someone who hasn’t lived in a share house, I struggled to relate. There are also short anecdotes from John’s former housemates scattered throughout the book - but they’re placed almost at random on the pages and it made reading the book quite disjointed for me.

Overall, it was a nice, light read.

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3.0

I read this while I was living in a share house in Sydney! There were moments I laughed out loud and others (too many!) when I cringed inside. I could relate to a considerable portion of this book and that is probably what made me lose interest in it after a point. It got a little repetitive.

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funny lighthearted fast-paced

4.0

kizza's review against another edition

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4.0

Australian sharehouses of the 80s, bucketbongs, and crazies. All live within these pages. It is dark, sometimes grim, but it is also hilarious. This book is a must read for anyone who has ever had to share their living space with virtual strangers (and sometimes, even friends).

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4.0

Read for Popsugar 2020: Book on TBR You Associate with a Favorite Person, Place, or Thing (and who doesn't love falafel?!)

A ridiculously trashy but ultimately fun book about one guy's experiences living in shared housing in Australia back in the day. After reading some drearier titles this was exactly the sewer fluff my brain needed.

amethyst_hearts_books's review against another edition

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1.0

It wasn't hilarious so much as sad and discouraging.

thedylanzone's review against another edition

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funny lighthearted medium-paced

4.0