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cpcabaniss's review
4.0
This is a very well written short story with an interesting magic system built into the modern world. It definitely has me intrigued and I'm excited to see where Maggie goes in the next installment.
While this is a fun short story I felt that the ending was slightly rushed. The conclusion was satisfactory overall leaving just the right amount open for more stories to follow without an annoying cliffhanger. Just a bit more detail in those last couple of scenes would have improved the overall flow of the story.
While this is a fun short story I felt that the ending was slightly rushed. The conclusion was satisfactory overall leaving just the right amount open for more stories to follow without an annoying cliffhanger. Just a bit more detail in those last couple of scenes would have improved the overall flow of the story.
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