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kcmae's review
1.0
DNF @50%
This writer has a knack for writing about things that have nothing to do with the story. I’m half way through the book and the characters have literally only had four barely-almost conversations. Yet, somehow, he can’t stop thinking about her and she can feel him wherever he goes. How did the author manage to write at a snail’s pace and yet include no actual relationship. Even when they got together for pancakes... they ate pancakes. THAT’S IT! She did a cliche moan like she was eating through her vagina. He offered her his food, then they left.
I feel like an idiot for wasting so much time. But I was so hopeful that this would be one of those stories that start with nothing then suddenly smacks you with a whole lot of something.
I was wrong.
Maybe just skip to half way through, you won’t miss much.
This writer has a knack for writing about things that have nothing to do with the story. I’m half way through the book and the characters have literally only had four barely-almost conversations. Yet, somehow, he can’t stop thinking about her and she can feel him wherever he goes. How did the author manage to write at a snail’s pace and yet include no actual relationship. Even when they got together for pancakes... they ate pancakes. THAT’S IT! She did a cliche moan like she was eating through her vagina. He offered her his food, then they left.
I feel like an idiot for wasting so much time. But I was so hopeful that this would be one of those stories that start with nothing then suddenly smacks you with a whole lot of something.
I was wrong.
Maybe just skip to half way through, you won’t miss much.
newtonshart's review
5.0
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I cannot wait to read Book 2 Down Fall. This book was so intriguing I could not put it down. I highly recommend this book.
I cannot wait to read Book 2 Down Fall. This book was so intriguing I could not put it down. I highly recommend this book.
vane8402's review
5.0
Amazing
Another amazing book. And right when things were getting good, bam, here's a cliffhanger leaving you with you're mouth open. I definitely was not expecting that. Although I had a feeling he was hiding something but not that. Can't wait to read the next book to see how this ends.
Another amazing book. And right when things were getting good, bam, here's a cliffhanger leaving you with you're mouth open. I definitely was not expecting that. Although I had a feeling he was hiding something but not that. Can't wait to read the next book to see how this ends.
nean's review
5.0
At first her stepbrother was nice, but it had gotten worse, he wanted to control her like he did his crew, she had a plan to leave but just needed to get some more money from her job in the diner.
Brody saw what the files didn’t tell him, Hut’s stepsister was his one weakness and could be the answer they’ve been waiting for, for months. Seeing Hut hurt her, he knew he couldn’t step in, Lola was only a kid, nineteen but watching he knew she would give him up.
Lola knows that she should stay away from Brody, she was off limits to her brother’s crew, he was nearly twice her age, and she had to get out and getting involved with him she would stay. She didn’t want to leave herself open to heartbreak, she tried to fight it but the pull to him was too strong.
Brody can’t help the pull that Lola had, and he was struggling to deny it, he wanted his own bed, he knew he was in trouble, but how would he get out of it. The lines were blurring, and he needed to remember that Lola was a task, but it didn’t help the images in his mind. He needed to do his job and get out and not see her again but could he.
They take a leap with each other into the unknown, but when everything comes out your left with a WTF ending needing the next book.
Brody saw what the files didn’t tell him, Hut’s stepsister was his one weakness and could be the answer they’ve been waiting for, for months. Seeing Hut hurt her, he knew he couldn’t step in, Lola was only a kid, nineteen but watching he knew she would give him up.
Lola knows that she should stay away from Brody, she was off limits to her brother’s crew, he was nearly twice her age, and she had to get out and getting involved with him she would stay. She didn’t want to leave herself open to heartbreak, she tried to fight it but the pull to him was too strong.
Brody can’t help the pull that Lola had, and he was struggling to deny it, he wanted his own bed, he knew he was in trouble, but how would he get out of it. The lines were blurring, and he needed to remember that Lola was a task, but it didn’t help the images in his mind. He needed to do his job and get out and not see her again but could he.
They take a leap with each other into the unknown, but when everything comes out your left with a WTF ending needing the next book.
shanbreads's review
4.0
The story just grabs you and holds on tight until you devour every single word and it leaves you right there on that cliff waiting to fall over to continue the story!
Its intense..drama filled.. and angsty as hell and it's all I could ever want in a book.. throw in the hot swoon worthy Brody and boom your just heart explodes.
You want to hug Lola tight right from the start to the very end in this book.. shes young hardworking and just wants a better life away from step brother Hut and his illegal ways... but unfortunately nothing is easy for her and just when she thinks things are now going her way it all just blows up instead.
Abigail you have absolutely smashed it with this beauty and I cant wait to dive into book 2
Its intense..drama filled.. and angsty as hell and it's all I could ever want in a book.. throw in the hot swoon worthy Brody and boom your just heart explodes.
You want to hug Lola tight right from the start to the very end in this book.. shes young hardworking and just wants a better life away from step brother Hut and his illegal ways... but unfortunately nothing is easy for her and just when she thinks things are now going her way it all just blows up instead.
Abigail you have absolutely smashed it with this beauty and I cant wait to dive into book 2
forbiddenpoet13's review
5.0
I loved this book! I’m going to start the second one soon. The hardships and relationships are great. The storyline had me wanting to read more and more. Lola and Brody’s story is amazing and the cliffhanger leaves you needing to read the next book. Loved it and will recommend to all my reader friends.
mean_kitty7's review
3.0
It's about Lola, a 19 years old girl who wants to escape her messed up family and Brody, an undercover DEA agent. And then they both fall in love.
I love Lola. She's smart, determined, and kind. Brody is still a mysterious guy. Because the ending, though, what the eff?
I love Lola. She's smart, determined, and kind. Brody is still a mysterious guy. Because the ending, though, what the eff?
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