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vesper1931's review
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
2.0
In this Pride and prejudice variation, Elizabeth Bennet is visiting with the Collinses, when Darcy and the Colonel visit Rosings. Elizabeth, it is noticed to be is in love with Darcy while he only considers her a friend. Can he in the future fall in love with Elizabeth and havr their happy ending.
rachelcabbit's review
3.0
This was a delightful short story -a visionette which explores what would gave happened if the the Ramsgate affair had not happened and Darcy and Lizzie became friends that Autumn rather than 'enemies'.
What is fresh to the fanfiction circuit is that Lizzie is the first to fall in love in this story. A clever idea, however the story was too short and relatively drama free which left me a little disappointed.
I did enjoy it though.
What is fresh to the fanfiction circuit is that Lizzie is the first to fall in love in this story. A clever idea, however the story was too short and relatively drama free which left me a little disappointed.
I did enjoy it though.
ravenmoon's review
3.0
I have to say that this short story was enjoyable but it was way to short. I would have prefered the author had fleshed out the story a bit more. I liked the idea of the idea of Elizabeth being the one who was in love at first. It was a very original concept in the world of JAFF. Again I just wished she would have fleshed out the story a lot more. I'm sort of glad that I only read it on Kindle Unlimited and didn't shell out the money to buy this tale.
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