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Dragon Craved by Scarlett West

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notyourmotherslibrarian's review

tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.5

This book needs some serious editing. The POV changes randomly in the middle of chapters with no warning of whose POV it is. The grammar errors are challenging.

alejandra_guerrero's review

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medium-paced

1.5

It was a mess. The plot was disjointed, things were brought up to be forgotten, and things would be introduced out of nowhere. The world building is choppy at best. The dialogues are super cheesy and stiff. People don’t talk like that. And the whole “I’ll go to jail so my sister doesn’t” made no sense for the person Amelia is. She’s an ADA, she doesn’t believe in getting her sister’s record erased, but she’s willing to take her place so she doesn’t go to jail for STEALING? A woman who sent the MC’s brother to jail for driving a stolen vehicle he didn’t know was stolen. Please!
Not to mention the fact he’s a dragon doesn't have an impact on the plot. He shifts twice, and his dragon is never described fully.

allycats98's review

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2.0

I had to DNF this book, which I rarely do, but honestly the inconsistencies in the grammar just threw me off. It made me feel like I was reading an essay that was submitted at 11:59 without being reviewed. I feel like this storyline would have more potential in the hands of a better writer.