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A Child of the Revolution by Baroness Orczy

thenovelbook's review against another edition

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4.0

Wow!
Is it odd that one of the best Pimpernel books basically doesn't have the Pimpernel in it at all?
I'd been feeling like I must be "over" the Pimpernel books because the last few I've tried have wearied me a bit with their high-flown language, cookie-cutter ladies, and a godlike hero who is so unassailable that all suspense is gone... and then there was this!

The story is framed by Sir Percy, who's supposedly telling it, but you never really feel his presence again till right at the end.

Andre is a poor boy whose temper is often getting him in trouble with the higher-ups. After he grows up and the French Revolution begins, he skirts dangerously near to the bloodshed and the rising stars of the new republic, almost being counted as one of them. When he returns home to find his mother's house burned to the ground, and she's dead, he vows vengeance on the aristocrat who's responsible.

This aristocrat, de Marigny, is a pretty heartless guy, but he has a daughter who's really sweet, Aurore. She and Andre shared a "moment" in their childhood, and when he sees her again in adulthood, he moderates his vengeance toward her father, and says only that if she will marry him, she and her father will be kept safe from the bloodthirsty villagers, no matter what. She hates him for this, but pretty much has no choice; also, he is QUITE aggressive about this plan.

And the rest is, you know, a lovely tribute to Stockholm Syndrome... I sound sarcastic, but I really did just eat it up, it was a pretty compelling story of its type! At least Aurore had more gumption than some of the girls in the other Pimpernel books.
Anybody who's cool with the occasional novel about an alpha male, broody but misunderstood, will probably like this.

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3.0

Andre is a young hothead during the French Revolution who hates the aristocrats in his village. He joins a gang of ruffians to storm the estate of the Duc de Marigny and loot their riches. Because of a law that says an aristocrat can be saved from the guillotine if they marry a revolutionary citizen, Andre forces young Aurore de Marigny into marriage. She is horrified by this, but agrees to the marriage to save her father's life as well as her own.

I had so many problems with the direction of this plot, but I loved the writing style. I was also very disappointed that the Scarlet Pimpernel himself is not in this book at all. He barely gets two sentences in the entire book.

Andre as a character is described in delicious detail. We see his fury against the aristocrats who have everything, while his poor mother slaves away doing odd jobs of washing and sewing to make a few pennies. Andre is constantly described as having this unquenchable rage and hatred of the aristocrats, but especially of the de Marigny family in his village. As a teenager he gets into some minor trouble, and he is publicly punished, receiving a whipping in the town center where the aristocrats come to watch the public spectacle. He is humiliated and his rage increases.

He becomes more devious and depraved. As a teenager, he catches girls in side streets and steals a kiss from them. I think that is meant to sound romantic, but it sounds absolutely nightmarish to me. He is meant to be a lovable rogue, but I hated him so much. I've never been one to like the brooding bad boys, and this guy is the worst.

However, I will say that his character is extremely well-written. He is complex and emotional and a powerful character. The force of his personality dominates the entire book.

There are two early scenes where he meets Aurore de Marigny by chance, and both times he is struck by her beauty, but scowls at her to the point where she is frightened by the murderous look in his eye. Later on after their marriage, they have several tense scenes where they argue, and each time Andre goes out of his way to humiliate and emotionally torment Aurore. He is verbally abusive and threatens her several times.

The scene on the cover is when he offers her a sword to commit suicide, mocking her, knowing that as a good Catholic, she will not commit suicide, but will choose to suffer in an abusive marriage rather than take the easy way out.

The first 75% of the book establishes Andre as a really horrible person. He has a couple of good points. He loves his mother and is loyal to her, but ignores her sensible advice and gets into trouble anyway.

My whole problem with this book is the Stockholm Syndrome romance and the shoddy redemption arc that Andre supposedly goes through. It's never explained why Aurore finally falls in love with the husband who basically kidnapped her and has tormented her, and it's never explained how Andre came to have a change of heart and turn away from his evil deeds. He never exhibits any remorse for forcing her into a marriage she didn't want.

The redemption arc is sloppy at best. I didn't find it believable. Andre's friends tell Aurore a story about how he saved some soldiers lives during the war, and how brave and loyal that was.
Hmmm.... not buying it. Everything we hear about his redemption arc is second-hand. Other people tell Aurore about Andre and how "good" he is. We don't really see any significant change in his actual behavior, other than that he stops actively tormenting Aurore and mostly leaves her alone and is polite to her.

The romance happens way too quickly. One minute Aurore hates him and is horrified by his very presence, then she barely tolerates him because he is polite to her, and then suddenly she is madly in love with him.

Most of the first part of the book is spent establishing Aurore's absolute terror of Andre. These feelings of dread and intense fear are described so vividly, in Aurore's thoughts, her physical reactions, and in her dialogue. Everything about the beginning scenes scream that Aurore is disgusted and terrified by Andre, and that made me, the reader, disgusted and terrified with her. It would take a lot to diminish that level of fear and revulsion. And the story does not lead us into anything like a gradual romantic feeling developing. So disappointing.

If the author is going to establish such strong emotions of hatred in Andre and revulsion in Aurore at the beginning, a hasty romance cobbled together from bits of hearsay from other characters is NOT going to erase those first impressions.

The redemption arc is sloppy. The romance is not believable. I was not happy with this book. I was going to give it 2 stars, but ended up making it 3 stars because the writing style really is powerful.
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