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Protector by Avery Ford

myzanm's review against another edition

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3.0

I liked the main characters, just a bit too vague for my taste. I thought everyone else were even more scetchy. I didn't se the point in having dual points of view as it didn't actually give any deeper insight in neither Logan's nor Reed's minds.

Apart from that it was an ok read.

tltravis's review against another edition

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4.0

Sometimes

The protector, needs to feel protected too. Good story of two lost souls coming together when they needed each other most.

cadiva's review against another edition

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2.0

This is okay but would have benefited from a bit more character development

I skim read this book. While it had lots of promise, the characters were one dimensional, the plot was fairly obvious, there was no building up to Logan suddenly finding he fancied Reed.

Reed was a one note, irritating at times and, again, him falling for Logan wasn't given any development time.

However, the sex scenes themselves weren't badly done and, even though they dispensed with condoms as seems to be a trend atm, Logan's first time was a realistic exploration rather than some instant perfect moment.

Still, as a whole it was just lacking something to make it a fun read.

colleen_m's review against another edition

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3.0

A somewhat high strung fashion designer falls for his straight bodyguard while the two are hiding out from a stalker. Sweet, cute and fluffy, a good distraction romance with little drama.


Title: Protector
Author: Avery Ford
Genre: M/M Contemporary Romance






Plot Summary:


Reed Luxe is at a critical point in his career - he is a well known fashion designer and with that fame seems to have come a stalker. Threatening letters and gifts have hit a high point and it’s time to call in reinforcements.


Logan Price left the Navy and settled into a small town to open a bike shop. He is loving the quiet life after having a traumatic final tour as a Seal, but the bike shop isn’t exactly booming in the quiet, lazy town. So when the opportunity presents itself he decides to take on Reed’s personal security as a means to get some cash flow. But it doesn’t go how he expects it. First of all, his boss is attractive.. And how can that be, when Logan has never considered men before? And second, despite his fame, Reed goes out of his way to include Logan, making Logan feel wanted for the first time in his life.


The two will need to overcome their own fears and miscommunications as well as the physical threat in order to have their happily ever after...
Character Descriptions/Development: 3 stars


Reed is a spoiled brat sometimes (complaining about his manicure, etc) , so the fact that I found him endearing anyway says something.


I admired that Logan was dedicated enough to not want to start something with Reed while he was guarding him, but also that he accepted his feelings for a guy so easily.


My main issue was just that the book moved along so quick at the expense of actual relationship building. It wasn’t love at first sight, but it was love at days-of-kind-close-quarters-but-little-to-no-talking.


Storyline/Conflict: 3 stars


In addition to the stalker part:


> Logan’s past, self loathing, and dealing with finding a man attractive
>Reed’s past at home and insecurities


Nothing here was overly exciting, it all flowed well.




Writing Style:4 stars


Well edited, but as mentioned, a quickly paced romance storyline was a minor downfall here.


Heat: 4 stars


This was mostly a slow-burn, with actual sex not happening until about 80% and prior to that, some heavy petting. Once it did happen though, it was hot and sweet at the same time.


Favorite Quote:
Logan could’ve said it felt wrong but in his heart he knew it wasn’t. Any doubt he’d had and all tension in his body evaporated as Reed opened his mouth and teased him with his tongue. The kiss was nothing like Logan has ever experienced.

crazychriss93's review

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4.0

Interesting one.

3.5 stars?

I enjoyed reading it but wasn't blown out of my mind. No, didn't mean that like that... Well, you know.

Okay, so the characters?
I liked them. Sure, Reed seemed like a superficial designer who is high and mighty but when we get to know him better, that changes.
Our lovely bodyguard isn't really a good bodyguard - and that ruined the whole plot a bit because it took out all the suspense. I just don't get why Reed would just put his life on hold because of a stalker. Plus, just because you move out of the city doesn't mean you are suddenly safer... That was just a stupid move and then Logan doesn't really act like a bodyguard most of the time which was pretty hard to read as well.

I think our mcs definitely had some chemistry going on there. Plus, there was also some drama so that was good.

Anyways, plot?
Yeah, the plot annoyed me a bit, to be honest.
As mentioned before, the whole moving away thing was just over the top and when they were at the farm, there was just no suspense at all. Plus, Reed was never really bothered or scared or anything. He never even thought about the stalker once he was away from the city so that ruined the whole 'OMG, what's gonna happen next' feeling. It just wasn't there.

Writing style?
Yeah, it's good but that's it ;)
I hated that there were just sooo many mistakes in there. I mean, seriously, some of the typos were just so annyoing...

ktomp17's review

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3.0

I'm voluntarily reviewing a free advance reader copy I received from the author.

Reed is a famous designer who started receiving weird stalkerish threats. Logan, who is out of the military and dealing with some PTSD, is hired as his bodyguard. They have a connection between them, but Logan tries to keep his distance to remain professional. The stalker was a bit obvious after a bit, and was a little weird
why did he pick then to start sending letters, and why did he go that route? Was there a past history of Reed turning him down that we do know?
Regardless, I'm glad they were able to work things out, though, and get their HEA.

hypnoticx's review

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3.0

This story covers everything for a comfort and easy read, it's unrealistic and cliche along with super cheesy but it's enjoyable in the best way because of it. I loved Logan from the moment we met him, his serious and sweet not to mention hot as hell. Reed I took a bit longer to like, but damn I thought he was adorable especially with Logan.

Their interactions are the heart of the story and so much fun, theres some serious tones here and there with a bit of exploration into both of their history. Also this story could have been really dark considering the subject and yet it sadly fell a little flat, in the mystery/stalker aspect. Those moments were incredible, even though only a few scenes actually explored that plot line and I almost wish had been a bit more serious towards it as would have boosted the story. I didn't find it difficult to guess either, I was slightly disappointed to be right.

I enjoyed the dancing, the barn, shopping and the nightmare comfort is so beautiful. I just really liked that despite how different they're somehow they fit together so well. It all worked out in the end. Oh and Reeds parents are awesome.

Sadly these two are rather foolish at times, especially considering the situation Logan was not always great as a bodyguard and Reed wasn't exactly helpful either. They had some communication issues, but thankfully resolved quickly in the end and I was happy to see them get together. Overall I enjoyed it for a fast paced and sweet romance, I only wish the plot/story had been given more focus instead of just the romance as would have added so much more to their development.

Oh and the epilogue was lovely! Great to have a look into the future for these two and its perfect xx

cadiva's review

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2.0

This is okay but would have benefited from a bit more character development

I skim read this book. While it had lots of promise, the characters were one dimensional, the plot was fairly obvious, there was no building up to Logan suddenly finding he fancied Reed.

Reed was a one note, irritating at times and, again, him falling for Logan wasn't given any development time.

However, the sex scenes themselves weren't badly done and, even though they dispensed with condoms as seems to be a trend atm, Logan's first time was a realistic exploration rather than some instant perfect moment.

Still, as a whole it was just lacking something to make it a fun read.
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