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Astel: Chosen by J.R. Murdock

nomad_scry's review

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3.0

I'm reluctant to rate this one. There were some rather confusing typos and word omissions in the version I read, and the overall story failed to grab my interest. That said, I think that the story was well told, and if I can get an updated file, I'll share the story with my son. I think he may appreciate it a lot more than I did.
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