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readerjq's review
2.0
This story had potential but it was confusing and hard to see who the story was really about.
regencyfan93's review
2.0
I felt like there were inconsistencies such as Shannon not having any friends and earlier Martin was the best friend.
The author indicates that this is a sketch for a longer story. It felt like a draft and the author's note at the end made it a little better.
The author indicates that this is a sketch for a longer story. It felt like a draft and the author's note at the end made it a little better.
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