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samyanther's review against another edition
2.0
2.5*
I'll try to start off with some good points. We finally find out what happened to Lindsey! (About time)
Story wise, the last 1/4 off the book was OK(ish) and everything was wrapped up nicely. Smikey was probably my favourite.
So.... the rest of the book was boring. Yes there was smut but having a smex sence that calls a women downstairs 'her wet tissue' just reminds me of when you find a bit of tissue paper down there lmfao. It's soo off putting.
Lindsey is very much a sunshine person with no actual substance to her character.
The men ( I've already forgot there names and finished the book 5 minutes ago).
Lindsey activatly goes to a different planet to marry 2 men ( sounds promising).
She gets married and then never leaves the house , doesn't build a relationship with anyone including her husbands.we get no idea of what the new planet is like because she left the house maybe once. All we know is she likes dresses, she literally doesn't do anything.
The men spend all the time in there office other than the smex which comes across that it's maybe a once a week occurance or the occasional romp in the office.there isn't any relationship building and literaly seems like she is used as an occasional smex toy(and not in a good BDSM way).
The time she does leave the house, we don't know what the vehicle is like, what the shop we visit is like , the weather ? there isn't anything, no world building.
Then she gets kidnapped and we link up with a character from a previous book, but this is 3/4 into the nothingingness of the book. if we took out a good 1/4 of the book we would still get the same story and I wouldn't be that annoyed I've spent my time reading it.
The last bit of the book was enjoyable-after the kidnapping and if you've read my previous reviews you will see I expected to be disappointed but I wanted to know what happened to lindsey. If I had know she was such a wet lettuce of a character I don't think I would have cared.
After believing she had been betrayed so started to have a little more substance to her, but I think that was due to smikey. Also she way too trusting and believes everything at the drop of a hat.
I hate leaving bad reviews and always want to put some creative criticism if necessary but other than cutting out a good 1/4 of the book, giving the characters some actual character, world building, relationship building I feel like there isn't much of the book left. Well at least smikey was great.
I'll try to start off with some good points. We finally find out what happened to Lindsey! (About time)
Story wise, the last 1/4 off the book was OK(ish) and everything was wrapped up nicely. Smikey was probably my favourite.
So.... the rest of the book was boring. Yes there was smut but having a smex sence that calls a women downstairs 'her wet tissue' just reminds me of when you find a bit of tissue paper down there lmfao. It's soo off putting.
Lindsey is very much a sunshine person with no actual substance to her character.
The men ( I've already forgot there names and finished the book 5 minutes ago).
Lindsey activatly goes to a different planet to marry 2 men ( sounds promising).
She gets married and then never leaves the house , doesn't build a relationship with anyone including her husbands.we get no idea of what the new planet is like because she left the house maybe once. All we know is she likes dresses, she literally doesn't do anything.
The men spend all the time in there office other than the smex which comes across that it's maybe a once a week occurance or the occasional romp in the office.there isn't any relationship building and literaly seems like she is used as an occasional smex toy(and not in a good BDSM way).
The time she does leave the house, we don't know what the vehicle is like, what the shop we visit is like , the weather ? there isn't anything, no world building.
Then she gets kidnapped and we link up with a character from a previous book, but this is 3/4 into the nothingingness of the book. if we took out a good 1/4 of the book we would still get the same story and I wouldn't be that annoyed I've spent my time reading it.
The last bit of the book was enjoyable-after the kidnapping and if you've read my previous reviews you will see I expected to be disappointed but I wanted to know what happened to lindsey. If I had know she was such a wet lettuce of a character I don't think I would have cared.
After believing she had been betrayed so started to have a little more substance to her, but I think that was due to smikey. Also she way too trusting and believes everything at the drop of a hat.
I hate leaving bad reviews and always want to put some creative criticism if necessary but other than cutting out a good 1/4 of the book, giving the characters some actual character, world building, relationship building I feel like there isn't much of the book left. Well at least smikey was great.
honeysbookobsession's review against another edition
4.0
I was waiting this book and it was everything I hope it would be.
brianna_meshelle's review against another edition
4.0
Definitely one of the better books in the series.‘I loved how light and not serious Lindsey was about everything. It was nice to see a book about her whole story.
shinysue's review against another edition
3.0
This is definitely not high literature. It's fine, I like the way the story is weaving together. The characters aren't that well fleshed out, especially Lindsey.
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