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goodthingsread's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.5
Point (1) felt like it could have really been something. Unfortunately, Jordan being adopted and trying so hard to blend in actually made her ethnicity fade into the background. It's accurate and understandable characterization and I don't really fault it in that respect. But it was a letdown, especially when Jordan meets up with a group of Vietnamese (and other Asian) performers that assist in her tapping into her innate magic and her history. That comes so late in the book, however, that it feels very tacked on and doesn't really get dug into. Jordan gets so drunk halfway through a hangout with those characters that everything gets fuzzy and forgotten but while drunk she learns things and reveals things about herself, but because it's all from her perspective, we don't get the full impact. I would have much rather had Jordan learning more about her background and herself earlier in the story and running as an undercurrent throughout, but I don't know if the author didn't want to do that for her own reasons or because it wouldn't have worked while sticking to the original <i>Gatsby</i> story.
Point (2) I was <i>extremely</i> frustrated by because the magic system and world building around it was so infuriatingly vague. It's very loose and sprinkled here and there, seemingly never a part of the main narrative until the very end, so it's frustrating to not understand and feel like I'm missing something. For example, when Jordan is invited up to see Gatsby, she says she feels cloaked in something that makes others not notice her. Then, when she arrives in Gatsby's office, she feels like it's ripped away under his gaze <b>or</b> that his gaze is just that sharp. I genuinely have no idea which is or even could be true, and it doesn't add an air of mystery (like perhaps intended) but makes me feel like I am missing something that should be obvious, if I knew more about the setting's magic. I am definitely missing the impact of some uses of magic simply from lack of knowledge. The scene where Jordan watches land magic from the train to New York means practically nothing, just thrown in there like an afterthought, and I can tell that it was intended to mean more. Additionally, the casualness with which Jordan talks about ghosts is also a part of this. Is Jordan the only one who can see ghosts? For the longest time, I thought ghosts were simply confined to the Baker house/family until the very last chapter. I also can't tell who is a ghost until she makes it obvious, three paragraphs later. Magic is treated both as superfluous, glitter sprinkled about to make things a little shinier and unique, but it's also a central part to the end of the novel, informing the choices of so many characters. (And is a huge part of the final scene between Jordan and Nick, which just blindsided me so hard that I spent a very long time staring into space trying to process.)
There's also this weird note I got from some moments. At a certain point, Jordan speaks about how she likes to keep herself untethered and starts to talk about how "that summer" felt different. I think this is supposed to foreshadow the impending fall of the Roaring 20s and the Great Depression, but it comes off sounding like a teen waxing poetic about summer camp. "The things we learned <i>that summer</i> would stay with us for the rest of our lives..."
All that being said, I really, really do like the author's writing style generally. It's poetic and smooth and beautiful. I just didn't like its application in <i>this</i> story. I also liked the touches of queerness, which I felt did appropriately influence Jordan's character and choices.
I want to give her other books a chance and I hope she continues to publish more over the years. This just doesn't work for me.
Moderate: Abortion, Alcohol, Kidnapping, Racism, Classism, Drug use, and Infidelity
Minor: Xenophobia, Death of parent, and Stalking
tinyjude's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Despite that, Jordan's heritage and how the political landscape of the time will affect her are barely addressed by. Her paper cutting magic and the magic realism aspects could have been used more prominently and the queerness of, especially Nick and Jordan, could have been explored in more detail. It felt as if still we only got them as a couple who were each fascinated by Daisy and Jay, rather than madly in love with them. I get it was supposed to feel confusing but I think it didn't translate that well into the text.
The interpretation about the souls was interesting, thou.
Graphic: Murder, Infidelity, Racism, Alcohol, Misogyny, Xenophobia, Car accident, Racial slurs, Classism, Death, and Deportation
Moderate: Toxic relationship, Toxic friendship, and Sexual content
Minor: Trafficking, War, Violence, and Physical abuse
zombiezami's review against another edition
3.75
Graphic: Racism, Sexual content, Addiction, Car accident, Colonisation, Death of parent, Bullying, Alcohol, Death, Murder, Alcoholism, Gaslighting, Xenophobia, Grief, Violence, and Infidelity
Moderate: Medical content, Vomit, Blood, Cursing, Toxic relationship, Abortion, Suicidal thoughts, and Toxic friendship
Minor: Kidnapping, Transphobia, Homophobia, Deportation, Gun violence, Child death, Slavery, War, and Pregnancy
writewithapendragon's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Moderate: Classism, Death of parent, Grief, Xenophobia, Cultural appropriation, Cursing, Abortion, Death, Emotional abuse, Blood, Racism, Toxic relationship, Infidelity, Abandonment, Addiction, Alcohol, Car accident, and Physical abuse
Minor: Abandonment, Classism, Grief, Car accident, Gaslighting, Injury/Injury detail, Homophobia, Infidelity, Lesbophobia, Alcohol, Racism, Toxic friendship, War, Blood, Body horror, Colonisation, Death, Deportation, Xenophobia, Child abuse, and Domestic abuse
katierobertsonshaddix's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Moderate: Toxic friendship, Drug use, Physical abuse, Cultural appropriation, Blood, Murder, Death, War, Xenophobia, Violence, Infidelity, and Emotional abuse
alizirrah's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
So why did it take me over 2 months to read this fairly short novel? I could not tell you. Possibly it was because it often took a lot of concentration to follow and parse each sentence's meaning, and when I tend to read before bed, this would lead to me nodding off after only reading a few pages. There were a few times that the story suddenly slipped into a flashback and I wasn't sure what time the scene took place, and other times I *thought* we had flashed back but then that scene actually had been current.
But it is an absolutely gorgeous book overall. The magical elements were fascinating and very memorable. I found this parallel universe 1920's U.S. very compelling.
Graphic: Sexual content, Drug use, Infidelity, and Car accident
Moderate: Alcohol, Xenophobia, Abortion, Racism, Toxic friendship, Domestic abuse, Toxic relationship, and Violence
talonsontypewriters's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
Graphic: Toxic relationship and Toxic friendship
Moderate: Racism, Xenophobia, Misogyny, Sexism, Abortion, Sexual content, Alcohol, Car accident, Colonisation, Injury/Injury detail, Gore, Classism, Death, Murder, Infidelity, and Domestic abuse
Minor: Suicide, Antisemitism, Fire/Fire injury, War, Gun violence, Kidnapping, and Homophobia
honeybeewitched87's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Sexual content and Car accident
Moderate: Alcohol, Cursing, Abortion, Blood, Death, Gaslighting, Infidelity, Misogyny, Toxic friendship, Toxic relationship, Xenophobia, Murder, and Racism
bessadams's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
Graphic: Xenophobia, Infidelity, Racism, Car accident, and Abortion
Moderate: Alcoholism, Sexual content, Emotional abuse, Murder, Injury/Injury detail, Deportation, Death of parent, and Death
itsheyfay's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Death, Alcohol, Classism, Racism, Homophobia, Xenophobia, Biphobia, and Toxic relationship
Moderate: Abortion, Sexual content, Vomit, Car accident, Injury/Injury detail, Misogyny, Cursing, Infidelity, and Pregnancy
Minor: War, Abandonment, Blood, Death of parent, Murder, and Suicidal thoughts