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gurusugu's review
2.0
I really wanted to like this book. I thought the lore would have been interesting, I love mythology, etc.
But ultimately, the book was written poorly and had several grammatical errors, including changing perspectives rather abruptly. The book needed an editor to make the stories more concise.
It also had too much exposition. I understand that it was supposed to have been written in the form of a journal entry, but ultimately, the approach did not yield a captivating narrative.
But ultimately, the book was written poorly and had several grammatical errors, including changing perspectives rather abruptly. The book needed an editor to make the stories more concise.
It also had too much exposition. I understand that it was supposed to have been written in the form of a journal entry, but ultimately, the approach did not yield a captivating narrative.
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