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The Private Patient by P.D. James

jimbowen0306's review

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3.0

The two commonest types of crime writer write either "gritty urban life" style whodunnits (like Dennis Lehane and Ian Rankin) or "country house" murders (like Agatha Christie). P.D. James (and this book, which is about an investigative journalist who is getting plastic surgery) falls very much into the second category.

Like many of James's recent books the characters could be out of central casting at the "Stiff Upper Lip Character Agency." They focus on form, position and show and act in the way they're expected to act throughout the book.

I'm getting to the point where reading a book in which the characters "do what one is expected to do" grates horribly, and there's a lot of that in this book. Consequently I won't be reading any more of James's books for a while.

If you can put up with a boat load of "Stiff Upper Lip," you might like this book (which is about a woman who dies at a private clinic after some plastic surgery). If get your head round "Stiff Upper Lip" attitudes, with "terribly correct upstairs types" and "cor blimey wait staff," you might like this book. Otherwise I wouldn't bother reading it.

joaniesickler's review

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1.0

Closing in on the ending. Have enjoyed her writing very much. Not thrilled that she introduces dramatic new character and plot developments without any basis. We'll see how she ends it. Still it's a good summer getaway read. Very disappointing. Draggy and sloppy. Too bad.

momma2sleuth's review

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mysterious slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

smusie's review

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4.0

Ate it up with a spoon. The Baronness is in fine form. The denouement was a little less than gripping, and the end was a little too wrappy-uppy--I was waiting for some final twist that never came. But, I'm not really complaining because the enjoyment was there. I went straight on to the new Elizabeth George, the poor woman's P.D. James.

julylo7's review

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5.0

her best, especially the jane austen quote at the end.

therealkathryn's review against another edition

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4.0

I'd really give this 3 1/2 stars but am rounding to 4 because of all the enjoyment I've gotten from this series. The mystery was rather light and had a hurried finish but it's always a pleasure to revisit the characters. While not as good as others in the series, that P.D. James wrote this in her late 80s is amazing.

aparkes's review

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slow-paced
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No

1.5

pewterwolf's review

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3.0

Might change mind over star rating as, while a solid crime, there are elements of the mystery that feels unfinished [maybe this was PD's plan all along] and one/two subplots that are really jarring/unnecessary [there's one subplot that affects one of our main detectives fiancée's friends that I have HUGE problems with as it's feels like a shock tactic and everything about this subplot happens off screen and is wrapped up so quickly].

Review taken from The Pewter Wolf Reads, as part of Reindeer Readathon 2020.

The final Adam Dalgliesh novel (as well as penultimate novel PD James wrote before her death in 2014 [her last novel was [book:Death Comes to Pemberley|12875355], a murder mystery sequel/fan-fic to Jane Austin’s [b:Pride and Prejudice|22676094|Pride and Prejudice|Jane Austen|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1422811831l/22676094._SX50_.jpg|3060926]) and we see Dalgliesh and the team investigate the murder off notorious investigative journalist, Rhoda Gradwyn, who was strangled in a private clinic in Dorset after the successful removal of a disfiguring scar. But as the team try and solve the murder, the question of innocence and guilt become far more complicated and line more blurred…

I’ve only audiobooked one PD James’s novel before this ([b:The Murder Room|2428021|The Murder Room|P.D. James|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1408926701l/2428021._SY75_.jpg|3049282], FYI) and I did enjoy it. And, at the time, I did enjoy listening to Private Patient. However, I finished the audiobook and felt… well… I felt a little unsatisfied.

Stay with me. I will explain why in a moment.

Like I said before with The Murder Room, I did like this. The writing is quite literary (though PD does have the habit to writing long paragraphs over details that don’t really matter in the scheme of things and things are very, very long-winded) and the narrator of the audiobook is great. His voice was engaging and smoothing. And yes, this is more police prodcedial than I am used to (always nice to mix it up, right?).

But the negatives. Oh, we have problems here, don’t we? I’m not sure how far I can go into explain my issues, but several things happen within this book that angered and frustrated and made me go “Ok, I’m unsatisfied”. First of all, this book has triggers (barring murder, of course). We have a subplot of a child’s murder (in the past and off page), a teacher fearing that he will be wrongly accused of being inappropriate with a child (in the past and we only really talk about this for a chapter. One chapter). But the biggest trigger I have issue with is an off-page violent assault and rape of a female character (not a main character, a female lesbian friend of Dalgliesh’s fiancé). This came out of nowhere and everything happening within this subplot was off page and was all resolved within a few chapters. This came across as a needless “shock” factor moment.

That’s with triggers, but the book’s biggest issue is the ending.
Spoiler We find out the killer and justice is delivered. You think that would be it, right? Nope, we have several chapters where the characters (suspects, detectives, even us readers) get the sense that maybe the killer wasn’t the killer and maybe they were covering for someone. Yes, in the eyes of the law, the case is solved, but is it? We never find out. I think I understand why PD James did this - she’s trying to show the not every case is going to be solve neatly. We have so many questions about Rhoda and her death and they aren’t solved. And yet, I feel like if authors are going to do that, they need to let their readers in on the truth. The characters can have this uneasy feeling but it feels like a con/cheat when the reader comes away from a mystery novel going “Wait, why’s the killer?”.


You can, also, tell that this is the last book in the series. The last few chapters where readers/characters feel unsettled, most characters are getting happily ever afters. Fine, I can deal with that, but again, most of this all happens off page. Again, if your main character is getting married and readers have been with him since the first book, [b:Cover Her Face|52024735|Cover Her Face (Adam Dalgliesh, #1)|P.D. James|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1583191692l/52024735._SY75_.jpg|625423] (first published in UK in 1962), you would think we readers would see his wedding… but nope.

I admit that, out of the two PD James I have audiobooked, I much prefer The Murder Room. I do have other James’s work on my kindle TBR so I will read her over the next few months/years ([b:A Mind To Murder|50279067|A Mind To Murder (Adam Dalgliesh, #2)|P.D. James|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1578205899l/50279067._SY75_.jpg|887937], [b:Unnatural Causes|50278012|Unnatural Causes (Adam Dalgliesh, #3)|P.D. James|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1578193485l/50278012._SY75_.jpg|58690], [b:The Mistletoe Murder and Other Stories|30972246|The Mistletoe Murder and Other Stories|P.D. James|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1467995066l/30972246._SY75_.jpg|50586645], etc), but I might lower my expectations as, while I did like this, Private Patient feels very unsettled and left me with more questions than answers (and not in a good way, either).

cjgmiranda220's review

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2.0

I liked the way the book started and the details you read about the victim. There were long, drawn-out details about the other characters in the book. There really wasn't enough suspects, so you only had three choices. Overall, I did enjoy the story, but I wasn't in love with it.

bluestarfish's review

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3.0

A country house murder, even though the country house in question is a cosmetic surgery clinic for private patients. There is some overarching wrapping up of storylines for the main detective team, but there is still an absorbing mystery to unravel along the way. And I really do appreciate the way the victim is never just "the victim" but that we do get to know her a little before the death.