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This ambitious sci-fi novel incorporates an intricate plot and a cast of thousands, most of whom appear in only a tiny portion of the book.
If I were beta reading this, I'd return it to the author with a heaping ladle full of praise – and a gazillion questions, comments, and critiques. As a first draft, this is a killer premise waiting to be turned into a blockbuster book. But as a finished product that I paid £3.99 for … it falls short.
Also, it needs a content warning for multiple on-page scenes of rape and sexual assault – always told from the perpetrator's perspective.
If I were beta reading this, I'd return it to the author with a heaping ladle full of praise – and a gazillion questions, comments, and critiques. As a first draft, this is a killer premise waiting to be turned into a blockbuster book. But as a finished product that I paid £3.99 for … it falls short.
Also, it needs a content warning for multiple on-page scenes of rape and sexual assault – always told from the perpetrator's perspective.
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