Reviews tagging 'Abandonment'

The Garden by Tomi Adeyemi

6 reviews

wytnie's review

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5.0

I really liked it, its short but it really makes you think and the ending is left up to however you interpret it. I also feel like people are being way to critical over something that's only a little over 40 pages? It felt like a think piece with a bit of poetry in it.
I personally think going back to the garden is going back to a version of heaven and that Leina and Yuliana both killed themselves in the end.

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biobeetle's review

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adventurous inspiring sad slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.0


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shadowspinner's review

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mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0


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angelsfw's review

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dark emotional tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0


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marleywrites's review

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challenging medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5

I can appreciate the writing to this story. If this was alluding to suicide, then I think I understood the story. If it wasn’t about that, I’m a bit lost. 😅

Assuming it was about suicide, I can feel the despair our main character was going through. She truly felt abandoned by her mother and felt this journey would bring her peace. 

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laurareads87's review

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dark mysterious reflective fast-paced

3.0

I have been enjoying these short story collections.  This is my first experience of Tomi Champion-Adeyemi's work and based on this, I'll absolutely seek out more.  I appreciated the writing, the atmosphere, and the mystery of this story; I feel like the author really created a sense of longing and uncertainty in very few pages.  What *really* didn't work for me, though, was the "alternating prose and verse."  I found the prose more poetic than the poetry, which just felt clunky and didn't really add anything.

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