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The Unredeemed by Luke Walker

errantdreams's review

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dark tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No

5.0

In Luke Walker’s horror novel The Unredeemed, Benjamin Harwood has been dead for 400 years. He spends his time carefully destroying lives and families by haunting them, something that he enjoys. He escaped going to Hell in the first place because he made a deal with a demon, Drude. Now Drude is coming after him in order to send him to the Pit, a place below even Hell itself. Drude’s attention seems to have been drawn by a newer ghost, Cooke, who is so appalled by Benjamin that he’s going a bit crazy trying to destroy him. Benjamin’s only chance is to rile up every ghost and shade he can to fight back.

Don’t get the wrong idea–Benjamin is as bad as they come. He killed untold people while he was alive, and all because he enjoyed it. His idea of haunting people results in ruined (and sometimes ended) lives. His own “friends”–ghosts who are almost as bad as he is–know how self-centered and narcissistic he is. He makes a strange choice for a narrator.

Drude has come for Benjamin, and in the only detail that didn’t work for me in this book, I still don’t know why. Benjamin killed a bunch of people for him 400 years ago, so why is Drude suddenly desperate to send him to the Pit, to the point of breaking the rules that govern demons? I felt this really needed to be addressed more.

The various dead characters are really interesting. Benjamin has sort of been collecting bad guys, and although he doesn’t particularly want to be a leader, he finds the possibility too useful to set aside. There are also some interesting living characters who get caught up in this, such as a teenaged girl and her mother. The rules surrounding what demons can and can’t do to/around mortals make this quite intriguing, especially since some rules cannot be broken no matter what Drude may want.

The worldbuilding is excellent. Hell is different than the usual depiction, and the purposes of most demons are unexpected as well. Drude is actually something of an anomaly. The ghosts also display some unusual abilities.

This is a really neat book, and the ending gave me chills!

Content note: murders, child murder, and a character who’s a pedophile.

Benjamin can be charming when he wants, but he’s definitely not terribly likable. And sometimes we need a reminder as to just how selfish he is. What we’re looking at is someone who’s so bad, it takes a major revelation to make him even slightly less objectionable, and honestly that’s fascinating. I’m used to seeing only two kinds of bad guys: the ones who don’t change at all, and the ones who make near-total turnarounds. This is much more believable and interesting.

charshorrorcorner's review

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4.0

Benjamin Harwood is a horrible man. I guess I should say "was" a horrible man, since he's been dead for about 4 centuries. He's been hanging around various places with his dead pals since then. The day he spots young Hayley and her family checking out a new house, he makes a decision that not only affects his life, but also that of all his ghostly friends and a few demons to boot. Will his decision pay off in the end? Will Hayley and her family be okay? You'll have to read this to find out!

The story's main base was the town of Dalry, (also the setting of Walker's book HOMETOWN), and though it sounds kind of charming, so many terrible, (yet fictional), things happen there I know I would never want to visit!

It's hard not to get too spoiler-y while reviewing this, but lots of action occurs once Ben "contacts" Hayley's family. Crossing the countryside while gathering an army of dead folk to battle demons, (one demon in particular who kept him out of Hell up until this point), there is no one safe from Ben. As he wheels and deals, he betrays everything that was ever important to him. At this point, I felt the pacing slowed down a bit leading up to the denouement. Then, all hell broke loose, so to speak!

A few times I had issues with Hayley's behavior, being that she was a 15 year old girl, but I chalked it up to her maturity level being a bit higher than her actual age.

Overall, I enjoyed this book and its original premise. (There's more to it than I can get into here.) Even though most of the characters were not likable at all, they made for fun villains, and I liked and did root for Hayley. I bet you will too!

Recommended!

*I received an e-ARC from the author in exchange for my honest feedback. This is it.*
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