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themanfromdelmonte's review
2.0
The author doesn’t know whether he’s writing a thriller or a piece of whimsy. The plot and the central conceit are half decent. The action pieces aren’t too bad and if he’d cut most of the attempts at humour, which are very laboured in places, he might have a half decent story. The principal bad guy appears to have been lifted from a Carry On film.
What this book very badly needed was editing. Someone to keep the author focused.
I really must find a way of avoiding these self published efforts.
What this book very badly needed was editing. Someone to keep the author focused.
I really must find a way of avoiding these self published efforts.
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