kaitlinbisneau's review

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1.0

I read two stories and I just can’t continue.

The first story mixed up character relations (referred to someone’s fiancé as their brother). The second story has within the chunk of a third paragraph third person pov, first person pov, and some dialogue.

I have so many other books to read that I can’t spend any more time on this collection.

journey_sloane's review

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This really, *really* needed better editing. I DNFed to save my eyeballs.
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