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arkwen452's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
I WILL STRUCTURE THIS IN A MORE COHESIVE FORMAT FOR CLARITY LATER. I LIKED ELEMENTS OF THIS BOOK BUT STRUGGLED WITH A LOT OF IT🫤
I have a lot of thoughts about this book. While I'm happy that Nevada gains a more understanding of her magic and powers I did not like her character overall. I didn't like how objective she was against Rogan and she was all follow. The rules follow the law we can't do this we can't do that. You're in the line or the business of being a private investigator. You're not a cop and sometimes to get the job done those lines get blurred. I didn't find Rogan to be out of line or as wild and crazy as she thought he was.
I think she was more motivated or had this idea of him just based off of what that old video said about him and files. She never actually took the time to actually get to know him as a person despite them working together. She was always clear on her point of view and her morals and her hard limits and things like that which is fine it's fine to have hard limits about yourself and those around you, but she never afforded Rogan the same courtesy. They come from different worlds and as different and perhaps annoying and obscure the way she wanted to handle the case was he abided to every rule in every promise she sent his way. the book has action and it's fairly an even paste. However, I felt like I was reading a book most of the time just based off of Nevada's character vibe and how young and naïve she came across. I think the book is saved by Nevada's Grandmother the character bugs and her cousins. I do like Rogan and I would have liked to seeing things from his perspective more.
At this time I cannot say that I will continue the series; there were a lot of stereotypes appropriations from other cultures, glorification of other religions, glorification of the military, and the justice department, and the police which I just could not stomach or swallow really. It very much felt like a book written by someone who has either been a cop or in the military and I know that that is the case for half of the writing duo for this book and to me it just felt like a swan song and not a very good swan song a very stereotypical swan song for soldiers in the military or the police force. This was just a book about magic, and our world wasn't a blend of the real world and this different world where magic exist. I would've had a stronger liking for the store as a whole.
To really expand upon this point, I have to say that I don't think it's fair to use soldiers who have been in conflict, Attles or war as a story, trope in any way, shape or form, unless it's relevant to the story as a whole being based about a full military group of characters, etc.
I think that this most of the time generalizes a lot of soldiers, and to be set categories; not all of their stories are the same. And Nevada has this beacon of righteousness. It really knows at the reader because it's from the very beginning of the book, that's how we are introduced to her as she wraps up her first case, and her wanting not to be Arrested or questioned by the cops. I mean if she had her cousin Bernard, who is this programmer and Taki kid also has his connection to bugs isn't it more feasible to have this security back up system in place for when you're in public places to cover your back when it comes to surveillances or to tap into set surveillances so that you don't go into things blind? Yes, she's usually on her own when in the field, but being able to have access to information is always beneficial in my opinion.
I have a lot of thoughts about this book. While I'm happy that Nevada gains a more understanding of her magic and powers I did not like her character overall. I didn't like how objective she was against Rogan and she was all follow. The rules follow the law we can't do this we can't do that. You're in the line or the business of being a private investigator. You're not a cop and sometimes to get the job done those lines get blurred. I didn't find Rogan to be out of line or as wild and crazy as she thought he was.
I think she was more motivated or had this idea of him just based off of what that old video said about him and files. She never actually took the time to actually get to know him as a person despite them working together. She was always clear on her point of view and her morals and her hard limits and things like that which is fine it's fine to have hard limits about yourself and those around you, but she never afforded Rogan the same courtesy. They come from different worlds and as different and perhaps annoying and obscure the way she wanted to handle the case was he abided to every rule in every promise she sent his way. the book has action and it's fairly an even paste. However, I felt like I was reading a book most of the time just based off of Nevada's character vibe and how young and naïve she came across. I think the book is saved by Nevada's Grandmother the character bugs and her cousins. I do like Rogan and I would have liked to seeing things from his perspective more.
At this time I cannot say that I will continue the series; there were a lot of stereotypes appropriations from other cultures, glorification of other religions, glorification of the military, and the justice department, and the police which I just could not stomach or swallow really. It very much felt like a book written by someone who has either been a cop or in the military and I know that that is the case for half of the writing duo for this book and to me it just felt like a swan song and not a very good swan song a very stereotypical swan song for soldiers in the military or the police force. This was just a book about magic, and our world wasn't a blend of the real world and this different world where magic exist. I would've had a stronger liking for the store as a whole.
To really expand upon this point, I have to say that I don't think it's fair to use soldiers who have been in conflict, Attles or war as a story, trope in any way, shape or form, unless it's relevant to the story as a whole being based about a full military group of characters, etc.
I think that this most of the time generalizes a lot of soldiers, and to be set categories; not all of their stories are the same. And Nevada has this beacon of righteousness. It really knows at the reader because it's from the very beginning of the book, that's how we are introduced to her as she wraps up her first case, and her wanting not to be Arrested or questioned by the cops. I mean if she had her cousin Bernard, who is this programmer and Taki kid also has his connection to bugs isn't it more feasible to have this security back up system in place for when you're in public places to cover your back when it comes to surveillances or to tap into set surveillances so that you don't go into things blind? Yes, she's usually on her own when in the field, but being able to have access to information is always beneficial in my opinion.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Gun violence, Physical abuse, Death, Violence, and Classism
Minor: Death of parent, Cultural appropriation, Racism, Torture, and Misogyny
hanee's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
funny
mysterious
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Content Warnings
Graphic: Blood, Car accident, Gun violence, Kidnapping, and Physical abuse
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