Reviews

After the Rain by Shannon Eckrich

colbydcox's review

3.0

This short story isn't bad, really. In fact, I kind of liked the idea of it. The problem is, I didn't feel like seven pages gave me time to care about the characters. I think that it could have definitely been done as a longer short story, or even as a novella. The author could have told us more about the characters, especially Adam and the MC. If you have ten minutes, though, you should read it. Your opinion could be different than mine...but for me, it was just sort of empty.

colbyc's review

3.0

This short story isn't bad, really. In fact, I kind of liked the idea of it. The problem is, I didn't feel like seven pages gave me time to care about the characters. I think that it could have definitely been done as a longer short story, or even as a novella. The author could have told us more about the characters, especially Adam and the MC. If you have ten minutes, though, you should read it. Your opinion could be different than mine...but for me, it was just sort of empty.