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kstumpf's review against another edition
3.0
Another good story. Not as many errors, but a few.
“It had been mask to read like a domestic network any small business might run.” Masked? Made?
“She discarded her old cigarette and selected took a new one for herself and lit it.” Selected? Or took? Not both.
“But the Peterbilt bounced off the concrete divider and careened to its right, bunting the Buick into the left lane.” How does a truck bounce off the concrete divider to his right, yet more a car to its left?
I guess I will read installment 3 to see where James Hicks winds up.
“It had been mask to read like a domestic network any small business might run.” Masked? Made?
“She discarded her old cigarette and selected took a new one for herself and lit it.” Selected? Or took? Not both.
“But the Peterbilt bounced off the concrete divider and careened to its right, bunting the Buick into the left lane.” How does a truck bounce off the concrete divider to his right, yet more a car to its left?
I guess I will read installment 3 to see where James Hicks winds up.
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