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zakfar_magni's review
1.0
Jocelyn has good composition skills. Many of her books have good concepts. Yet, most of her books are bad, mainly because those are written like short stories. This book had almost double the word count compared to other books. So I had high expectations. Sadly, this one is even worse than many other stories. There is literally zero characterization. The story seems to be going nowhere. There are just scenes and scenes of Femdom Mind-Control and some forced feminization scenario. But the story has no progression. We never learn true depth of the two characters, and we don't know where this would go ahead after the abrupt ending. Jocelyn surely needs to read some books of good authors. I'm surely she can then write lot better stories.
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