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ambercunningham's review
adventurous
dark
emotional
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I’m deeply embarrassed by this Wattpad read lol but I was also deeply hooked. Terrible writing of course, but surprisingly gripping story. Look sometimes you just need to read trash for a few days. A palate cleanser if you will
Content Warnings
Graphic: Confinement, Death, Gore, Grief, Murder, Torture, Classism, Colonisation, Toxic relationship, Emotional abuse, Medical content, Medical trauma, Pregnancy, Genocide, Sexual violence, Violence, Abandonment, Blood, Sexual assault, Kidnapping, Bullying, Racism, War, Alcohol, and Sexual content
hnygren's review
4.0
I got sucked into this one on Facebook. Kept me interested much like her Fated to the Alpha series but also like that one it is unfinished. I would rather pay a few bucks extra to get a complete copy then what is likely to amount to $50 paying by the chapter.
I'll keep waiting and hopefully it will pop up as an ebook somewhere.
I'll keep waiting and hopefully it will pop up as an ebook somewhere.
lululovesbooks77's review
5.0
I dont generally like werewolf stories, but this one had be gripped!!! Jessica Hall is a great writer! I felt that the storyline was amazing and she had strong female characters! I dont care of grammar or small mistakes as long as the plot and characters are worth reading about!
I hope she takes her book off goodnovel app though because it was SOOO EXPENSIVE!! I hope she sells to Amazon Kindle or can publish it another way. Even Galatea is more affordable to readers.
I hope she takes her book off goodnovel app though because it was SOOO EXPENSIVE!! I hope she sells to Amazon Kindle or can publish it another way. Even Galatea is more affordable to readers.
reading_no_shelf_control's review
3.0
Pretty decent story. Good storyline with decent character development. I am not sure if it is an in App or poor editing thing, but there are so many typos that there are times when you need to use context clues to figure out the word, but they seemed to repeat, so eventually you were able to just replace the incorrect word with the correct one when it came up.
hopecobblepotworld's review
adventurous
challenging
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Do NOT use the App to read this book. You can read it here:
https://swnovelss.com/alpha-s-regret-my-luna-has-a-son/r233973.html
Story ***** - the actual story is a well constructed story with tropes of enemies to lovers, true mates, friendship, extremely strong female characters, family of choice vs biological family. The author wove a plot throughout this book that was integral to the entire story. It seemed niggling at times but it really made an impact at the end. The 3 main characters - Everly, Zoe, and Macey - are amazing women. What they live through and experience and the strength they exhibit is amazing.
The writing * - the writing was horrible. I got trapped into this on Facebook and did the reading app. Thankfully I found the link to the free book online. DO NOT PAY FOR THIS BOOK. The author needs to put this through at least a proofreader because not only are there egregious grammatical heresies in this story along with out and out typos, there are sloppy mistakes such as using the son's name when it is supposed to be the mate's name. Also, using different spellings for each girl. In example, Macey/Macy; Zoe/Zoey/Zoie. On swnovels.com, chapter 148 should be read before 147. They were uploaded backwards.
Conclusion - I hope the author will get herself at least a proofreader and an editor because as lovely as the story is, there are places it needs polishing and Dion isn't available (readers of the book will get that). Get it put together and then put it on Amazon for a reasonable price and yes, make it available on Kindle Unlimited. You'll be doing yourself a favor.
https://swnovelss.com/alpha-s-regret-my-luna-has-a-son/r233973.html
Story ***** - the actual story is a well constructed story with tropes of enemies to lovers, true mates, friendship, extremely strong female characters, family of choice vs biological family. The author wove a plot throughout this book that was integral to the entire story. It seemed niggling at times but it really made an impact at the end. The 3 main characters - Everly, Zoe, and Macey - are amazing women. What they live through and experience and the strength they exhibit is amazing.
The writing * - the writing was horrible. I got trapped into this on Facebook and did the reading app. Thankfully I found the link to the free book online. DO NOT PAY FOR THIS BOOK. The author needs to put this through at least a proofreader because not only are there egregious grammatical heresies in this story along with out and out typos, there are sloppy mistakes such as using the son's name when it is supposed to be the mate's name. Also, using different spellings for each girl. In example, Macey/Macy; Zoe/Zoey/Zoie. On swnovels.com, chapter 148 should be read before 147. They were uploaded backwards.
Conclusion - I hope the author will get herself at least a proofreader and an editor because as lovely as the story is, there are places it needs polishing and Dion isn't available (readers of the book will get that). Get it put together and then put it on Amazon for a reasonable price and yes, make it available on Kindle Unlimited. You'll be doing yourself a favor.
Content Warnings
Minor: Abandonment, Violence, Sexual violence, Xenophobia, and Abortion
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