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dark_sk8r's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Mental illness and Panic attacks/disorders
Moderate: Alcoholism and Emotional abuse
Minor: Body shaming and Fatphobia
patelyne's review
3.75
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Abandonment, and Alcoholism
sleeping_unicorn's review
3.75
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders
Moderate: Addiction and Alcoholism
kornwaiisms's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Emotional abuse, and Alcoholism
Moderate: Abandonment, Injury/Injury detail, and Child abuse
Minor: Car accident and Body shaming
lanaw's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Graphic: Addiction, Abandonment, and Panic attacks/disorders
emptzuu's review
The execution ultimately succumbs to clichés. The portrayal of a young girl shouldering familial responsibilities and an athlete facing struggles due to injury feels all too familiar, reminiscent of similar storylines seen in various media. The exploration of mental health from an athletic perspective isn't groundbreaking, and the book fails to bring a truly innovative angle to these well-trodden themes.
Sadie is portrayed problematically, with her treatment of Rhys bordering on abusive. Her erratic behavior lacks clear justification, and while her personal struggles are evident, they don't excuse her mistreatment of Rhys. This inconsistency hints at a lack of thorough characterization by the author. The portrayal lacks depth, reducing Sadie to a simplistic character whose actions toward Rhys feel disjointed and underdeveloped.
Rhys' panic attack lacks depth and realism, with the transition from distress to calmness feeling abrupt. Additionally, the detailed focus on Rhys' physical attractiveness during his distress could be perceived as objectifying, undermining the seriousness of the situation. Sadie's flirtatious comments detract from the gravity of Rhys' condition.
During the panic attack, Sadie's lack of sensitivity and empathy is evident. Her dismissive remarks and attempts to rush Rhys off the ice showcase a disregard for his well-being. A more supportive approach, such as reassurance and offering calming techniques, would have been more appropriate.
Now, about Rhys. Although it's not explicitly stated, the book suggests he may be dealing with a combination of depression, PTSD, and panic disorder based on the descriptions given. When he says, "I want to ask her to keep it there because this is the first anything, other than pain, I’ve felt in months," it highlights a common misconception about mental health; relying solely on someone else for healing. This isn't a cure or a sustainable solution.
The depiction of their relationship dynamics reveals troubling patterns of manipulation and codependency, rather than genuine care and understanding. Both characters are in need of therapy rather than relying on each other for healing. The rushed pacing and sudden romantic development between Rhys and Sadie feel contrived and lacking in authenticity, further undermining the narrative's credibility.
In summary, while the premise of the book holds promise, its execution falls short due to inadequate research, unrealistic portrayals of mental health, and inconsistent characterization. As a debut novel, it reveals the author's lack of experience in handling such delicate themes with the depth and sensitivity they require.
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders and Toxic relationship
readingonthefly's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Sexual content, Grief, Addiction, Injury/Injury detail, Panic attacks/disorders, Abandonment, Alcohol, Bullying, Physical abuse, and Alcoholism
hjb_128's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Sexual content, Panic attacks/disorders, Alcoholism, Injury/Injury detail, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Toxic relationship, Abandonment, and Medical trauma
Minor: Vomit
mmollyyy's review against another edition
4.0
Graphic: Alcoholism, Gaslighting, Mental illness, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Panic attacks/disorders, and Injury/Injury detail
readingwithkim_'s review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Moderate: Emotional abuse, Panic attacks/disorders, and Alcoholism