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A Bond Undone by Jin Yong, Gigi Chang

mchung's review against another edition

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Loan expired - story is solid and it picks up directly where the last book ended without a whole lot of unnecessary set up. I just need to put the time aside to read/listen to it. The library doesn't have a digital copy, only an audio, so I need commit to putting time aside to read it. 

heather_leighbros's review against another edition

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adventurous funny medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

This series is a good time, I love how immersive the interactions are. There are times when I get confused since transitions happen quickly. The names of all the kung fu is my favorite part - like dragon subduing palm - they are creative and it’s fun to collect them along the way as our hero gets more skills. 

yanlesbians's review against another edition

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3.0

“Too bad he passed away; he would have liked you so very much, little brother. You’re kind, honest, and forgiving. He’d have been able to pass on all his knowledge to you. Everything.”

kayleeg567's review against another edition

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adventurous funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted relaxing tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? N/A
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.75

I’m shocked; I really am. I absolutely love this world and the characters. The kung fu descriptions/translations are amazing, and THE PLOT IS SO GOOD!!! THE BOOK FLIES BY AND GUO JING NEVER SEEMS TO STOP MOVING!!! I LOVE IT!!! So close to being 5 stars, but it did take me a while to finish it. Around 1/4 of the way through, I lost a little interest because they were still in the same place, but after, it flew by. Overall great book and great series!!! 

leaf900's review against another edition

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4.0

3.5*

These stars are for Lotus Huang and Lotus Huang ONLY

She's the character that makes this book worth it
Guojing deserves NOTHING

iridja's review against another edition

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adventurous funny

4.25

grogu_djarin's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny lighthearted mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

Overall Thoughts:
This was a fantastic follow-up to A Hero Born! While there were substantially fewer historical tie-ins, the story takes its own original direction diving deeper into the martial arts realm and strengthening the relationship between Guo Jing and Lotus. This book begins immediately from where A Hero Born left off which means the book starts on an exciting note, but unfortunately it immediately slows down a bit after that and takes a while to build momentum again, but once it gets going it stays going. I definitely recommend reading this back-to-back in order to get a smoother narrative. That said, it builds on all the groundwork laid in the first book and I binged this book like the first one because I had to find out what happened next. It's certainly a grand adventure and features everything from martial arts masters to pirates!

Likes:
  • Guo Jing and Lotus are a great team and really play to each others' strengths.
  • Guo Jing has a significant power-up in this book and it feels rewarding watching him grow. I especially liked his face-off with Gallant Ouyang during Apothecary Huang's trials. 
  • I enjoyed getting to learn more about the five martial arts greats and several feature prominently in the story. Apothecary Huang in particular was equal parts impressive and terrifying.
  • The fight scenes again were superb.
  • The themes present in the first book (such as loyalty, duty, honor, love, etc) are all present in this one as well. 
  • There aren't as many twists as in A Hero Born, but the ones that are there fit well into the story especially the unexpected return of a certain character.

Dislikes:
  • The pacing was a bit odd. It started off probably at its most intense because it begins immediately from the cliffhanger in A Hero Born and has a quite action-packed beginning but later on there are several chapters of downtime that is mostly focused on Guo Jing training, but after a point the story picks up again and has a fairly steady pace.
  • The promised face-off between Guo Jing and Yang Kang that the whole first book built up to was really underwhelming, especially compared to their fight in the first book. 
  • The name localization feels even more inconsistent here. While partially localized names like Skyfury Guo and Ironheart Yang seemed alright in the first book, one of the prominent characters is called Count Seven Hong and that especially felt out of place. 

Other Notes:
  • While this book ends on a cliffhanger like A Hero Born, it feels like a more natural one at that rather than in the middle of an action scene so I think you could get away with taking a break after this one if you're reading all four volumes.
  • Like the first book, the appendix is full of notes that give added meaning to various cultural and historical references. Again, they aren't necessary but I found them worthwhile reading.

Would Recommend To:
  • Anyone who enjoyed the first book, A Hero Born. This continues immediately from where that left off and expands the story in new directions.

Do Not Recommend To:
  • Anyone who hasn't read the first book, A Hero Born, because this picks up immediately after that one. 

lottiev's review against another edition

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adventurous hopeful inspiring medium-paced

5.0

thorium0232's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny lighthearted reflective relaxing tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

colinhdempsey's review against another edition

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3.0

Continues with the strengths of the first book in the series; fantastic characterizations, unique conflicts, and world-building that never seems to end. Guo Jing steps up as a great main character. His arc is that he’s stupid. Incredibly so, but it’s endearing. Jin Yong turns Guo Jing’s stupidity into an advantage. It creates a wonderful contrast to Lotus’ quick wit.

The plot suffers by way of lacking an end goal. The novel plants little trails to follow that will presumably get resolved in the next two books but much of the book plods from place to place without much direction. As such much of the middle slogs. Excitement returns once everybody reaches Peach Blossom Island, but much like a sesame seed bun on a soggy meat burger, it can’t handle the banality of what preceded.