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bluejay_45's review against another edition
2.0
The concept seemed really cool and different from anything I had read before, so I really wanted to like this book! Unfortunately the writing was just so unedited that it was difficult to pay attention to the story line. It read more like a rough draft than a final published work and was very disappointing. I think it could be a really great YA fantasy if it was edited heavily.
daisymerolling's review against another edition
2.0
I was absolutely annoyed with this book. The beginning was okay. It kept me interested but getting more into the story I was slowly losing interest and getting annoyed by every freaking single character. Not to mention the relationship between Marcus and Em, so unrealistic! Arghh! I will go into more detail why I disliked this but I do not want to give any spoilers for anyone who still finds it in themselves to read this book. I wouldn't recommend it but then again this book could totally be good for someone else. Like the saying goes, "each to their own." I haven't even finished it yet and I don't think I want to, not after finding out who dies! but then again maybe I will just to see how it ends. But for now I gave it 2 stars because I can't find it in myself to give it a one.
cawilmoth's review against another edition
2.0
I like the characters and the premise. I don't like the way the story is told. I will likely continue the series since they are easy reads and I want to know how it ends.
algae429's review against another edition
1.0
Yeah, not a big fan. I realize this is YA, but everyone (even those who are thousands of years old) acted so immature. Plus, there was no feeling of time. There was a lot of talk of cycles and the like, but everyone acted like this was their first time at the rodeo.
2blueshoes's review against another edition
1.5
I don’t even know how to begin to describe how odd this book was. I almost stopped reading many times in the first few chapters, because the narrative was told from a fifteen year old’s point of view, and the writing was incredibly juvenile. The main character, Emerson, is unbelievably annoying. She constantly swings from emotional to belligerent, falls in incredibly toxic Insta-love immediately, and just acts all around foolish.
The book changed part way through to Marcus’ point of view - and was a totally different tone of voice. Slightly less annoying, and much better dialogue. Almost like it was written by a different person? Later in the book it switches back and forth between Marcus and Emerson’s perspective. It’s incredibly confusing.
Most strange of all were the sections of the book that read like a first draft outline of various world building aspects. Don’t get me wrong, the world building in this book was INCREDIBLE. It was so complicated and intricate. But the book kept reading like someone was just factually laying out random details about the world and how it works. They had almost no context to the story at all. There were entire pages just describing an angel sport like soccer where they kick around a bad guy instead of a ball. I found myself skipping pages at a time of unnecessary world building facts.
All in all I can’t say I liked this book. People die, the “good guys” are actually kind of terrible, and the concept of morality and God outlined here is really not one I can get behind. I mean, God sends an angel to hell because he saves children? I don’t think so.
There are a ridiculous amount of books in this series, but I don’t think I’ll be reading further.
The book changed part way through to Marcus’ point of view - and was a totally different tone of voice. Slightly less annoying, and much better dialogue. Almost like it was written by a different person? Later in the book it switches back and forth between Marcus and Emerson’s perspective. It’s incredibly confusing.
Most strange of all were the sections of the book that read like a first draft outline of various world building aspects. Don’t get me wrong, the world building in this book was INCREDIBLE. It was so complicated and intricate. But the book kept reading like someone was just factually laying out random details about the world and how it works. They had almost no context to the story at all. There were entire pages just describing an angel sport like soccer where they kick around a bad guy instead of a ball. I found myself skipping pages at a time of unnecessary world building facts.
All in all I can’t say I liked this book. People die, the “good guys” are actually kind of terrible, and the concept of morality and God outlined here is really not one I can get behind. I mean, God sends an angel to hell because he saves children? I don’t think so.
There are a ridiculous amount of books in this series, but I don’t think I’ll be reading further.
melmball92's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
emotional
funny
informative
mysterious
reflective
sad
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Main character cry’s…..a lot and has no self control
cometreadings's review against another edition
4.0
Guardians: The Girl is the first book in the Guardians Series. In this paranormal romance, Lola StVil describes what happens to a sixteen New Yorker, Emerson Baxter, when discovers a new world of angels and demons.
In this new reality, where good and evil are divided into many groups and roles, Emmy will find and lose true friends, and her feelings will be turned upside down by the presence of the first guardian, Marcus. Although in a normal situation she would act as the good girl and respect the relationship between Marcus and Ameana, she finds impossible to control her feelings and also avoid him.
While Emmy needs to manage this relationship, the guardians, teen angels with superpowers, fight to save the humanity, seeking the important and most wanted clue in her past.
This was my first book by Lola StVil, and I find the storyline with so many twists and turns really entertaining. The characters are well described, and also their behaviors, that sometimes appear unlikely for the role they have in this battle to save the world, is okay if we consider their living like “teenagers”. For example, we could think about Emmy’s attitude which sometimes appears too courageous for her age, other times unbelievably unreasonable.
I appreciate the author’s descriptive style, and actually, I’m curious to read the second book in the Series.
In this new reality, where good and evil are divided into many groups and roles, Emmy will find and lose true friends, and her feelings will be turned upside down by the presence of the first guardian, Marcus. Although in a normal situation she would act as the good girl and respect the relationship between Marcus and Ameana, she finds impossible to control her feelings and also avoid him.
While Emmy needs to manage this relationship, the guardians, teen angels with superpowers, fight to save the humanity, seeking the important and most wanted clue in her past.
This was my first book by Lola StVil, and I find the storyline with so many twists and turns really entertaining. The characters are well described, and also their behaviors, that sometimes appear unlikely for the role they have in this battle to save the world, is okay if we consider their living like “teenagers”. For example, we could think about Emmy’s attitude which sometimes appears too courageous for her age, other times unbelievably unreasonable.
I appreciate the author’s descriptive style, and actually, I’m curious to read the second book in the Series.
savvybrooks's review against another edition
2.0
Okay so this book was decent. Don't get me wrong I liked the diversity of the group and the world created had potential but a few things
1. The main character is completely annoying. She can't do anything for herself and is completely reliant on her friends and demands to be with this guy who completely ignores her and does so in front of his girlfriend like yes that's screwed up
2. You can't make a character who had been sidelined for so long become important and possibly remove Marcus from the competition and make me all excited about him for a total of two seconds and then kill him. You didn't even give him a chance to become anything. He was friendzoned and as soon as he escapes he dies? Like what? Could Marcus not have any competition?
3. What is with this love at first sight mumbo jumbo. She practically drools at his feet when he enters and then obsesses over him even though he's rude and over demanding. I would've given him a serious kick in the groin and he sees her points out everything that's wrong with her but he loves her. I realize his girlfriend is an itch with a capital B but she's kind of justified and to be honest I was happy when she got thrown into a wall. I swear I never read twilight but reading this book reminds me of the awkward and unreturned infatuation that was written about in it.
Either way I didn't really like it and the whole book frustrated me. It's okay for a character to need some help every now and then but don't be pitifully stuck doing nothing.
1. The main character is completely annoying. She can't do anything for herself and is completely reliant on her friends and demands to be with this guy who completely ignores her and does so in front of his girlfriend like yes that's screwed up
2. You can't make a character who had been sidelined for so long become important and possibly remove Marcus from the competition and make me all excited about him for a total of two seconds and then kill him. You didn't even give him a chance to become anything. He was friendzoned and as soon as he escapes he dies? Like what? Could Marcus not have any competition?
3. What is with this love at first sight mumbo jumbo. She practically drools at his feet when he enters and then obsesses over him even though he's rude and over demanding. I would've given him a serious kick in the groin and he sees her points out everything that's wrong with her but he loves her. I realize his girlfriend is an itch with a capital B but she's kind of justified and to be honest I was happy when she got thrown into a wall. I swear I never read twilight but reading this book reminds me of the awkward and unreturned infatuation that was written about in it.
Either way I didn't really like it and the whole book frustrated me. It's okay for a character to need some help every now and then but don't be pitifully stuck doing nothing.
leigh_haile's review against another edition
5.0
This was a good book. This author really knows how to draw you into the story.
brittneedsbooks's review against another edition
1.0
"The Girl" by Lola St. Vil, the first book in the Guardians series, unfortunately falls short of expectations, warranting a 1-star rating. While the concept of a teenage girl discovering her special powers and being thrust into a world of supernatural beings and prophecies holds promise, the execution leaves much to be desired.
One of the notable shortcomings of the book lies in its execution. The plot feels disjointed and fails to offer a cohesive and engaging storyline. The world-building lacks depth, leaving readers with unanswered questions and a sense of detachment. Additionally, the character development is lacking, with inconsistent actions and motivations that make it challenging to connect with the protagonists.
Furthermore, the writing style is underwhelming, featuring awkward dialogue and weak descriptive prose. The pacing is uneven, resulting in a narrative that feels rushed and dragged out at different intervals. Regrettably, the book fails to evoke a sense of tension or excitement, making it difficult for readers to stay fully engaged.
Overall, "The Girl" by Lola St. Vil is a book that didn't live up to its potential. While there may be aspects that some readers could find enjoyable, such as the concept, the weak execution hinders the overall reading experience. With underdeveloped world-building, inconsistent characterizations, and subpar writing, it's difficult to recommend this book when there are other young adult fantasy novels that handle similar concepts with more finesse and depth.
One of the notable shortcomings of the book lies in its execution. The plot feels disjointed and fails to offer a cohesive and engaging storyline. The world-building lacks depth, leaving readers with unanswered questions and a sense of detachment. Additionally, the character development is lacking, with inconsistent actions and motivations that make it challenging to connect with the protagonists.
Furthermore, the writing style is underwhelming, featuring awkward dialogue and weak descriptive prose. The pacing is uneven, resulting in a narrative that feels rushed and dragged out at different intervals. Regrettably, the book fails to evoke a sense of tension or excitement, making it difficult for readers to stay fully engaged.
Overall, "The Girl" by Lola St. Vil is a book that didn't live up to its potential. While there may be aspects that some readers could find enjoyable, such as the concept, the weak execution hinders the overall reading experience. With underdeveloped world-building, inconsistent characterizations, and subpar writing, it's difficult to recommend this book when there are other young adult fantasy novels that handle similar concepts with more finesse and depth.