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mudlistens2books's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.25
Graphic: Death of parent, Death, Gun violence, and Colonisation
antoniac's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Death and Alcohol
Minor: Death of parent, Alcoholism, Blood, Colonisation, Sexual content, and Grief
kshertz's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
Moderate: Death of parent, Injury/Injury detail, Gun violence, Alcohol, Alcoholism, Misogyny, Abandonment, Gore, Murder, Confinement, Death, and Gaslighting
simplykatherina's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.75
Graphic: Alcoholism, Colonisation, Death, Death of parent, Alcohol, Blood, Confinement, Gun violence, Violence, and Kidnapping
zarhara's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Gun violence, Alcoholism, Grief, Colonisation, Death of parent, Classism, Alcohol, and Abandonment
Moderate: Blood, Confinement, Kidnapping, Gaslighting, and Emotional abuse
Minor: Infidelity, Injury/Injury detail, and Misogyny
smilagros's review
Graphic: Death of parent
bree_h_reads's review against another edition
Graphic: Colonisation, Death of parent, Misogyny, and Sexism
Moderate: Abandonment, Alcohol, Alcoholism, and Grief
Minor: Racism
sustainably_lucia's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Grief, Death of parent, and Gun violence
Minor: Murder, Infidelity, Alcoholism, and Kidnapping
bluz19's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Moderate: Alcoholism
Minor: Death and Death of parent
hilsaa's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.25
Overall, it was an interesting magical realism/historical story and I would recommend it. I have read all Ibañez’s previous novels and it’s clear to me she writes quality stories that are appropriate for teenage and young adult readers.
Her books deal tactfully with real issues and interesting themes while being generally well-written. While this is not my favourite of her novels (That is Woven in Moonlight), it’s still a breath of fresh air in the hellscape of the current YA publishing industry.
I would have loved this book as a teenager and, while I’m not its target audience any more, I still enjoyed it for the most part, appreciated it for what it was, and see a lot of good in it for younger readers.
The book did have the feeling that it was originally one larger novel, maybe too large for the current market, so they capitalized on the author’s deserved success and created a duology with a bit too much fluff. (The next book starting “literally 5 seconds” after this one ends basically confirms this in my opinion.) I would have liked more description of the scenery, it didn’t often feel particularly vivid to me. The parts that did were short. It felt like the end of the book was just the middle of the story. Ending in the middle of a conversation the way it did… I think it could have been a great longer standalone.
The magic was so minimal, not really explained, and not talked about much despite being important to the plot. I’ve said this about nearly all the author’s novels - I want more magic!
I did feel there was a lack of active female characters. I hope there is some kind of twist or redemption arc because the anti-mother sentiment of all these men was not it.
All the main characters in Egypt, all the people in control of things there, are men. I’m suspicious of her uncle. His characterization was also kind of all over the place. Inez being kept out of the loop and them giving her no explanation and being shady as hell obviously influenced her actions with
Inez is a good depiction of a teenage girl/young woman, even though her characterization didn’t alway feel consistent. She doesn’t make the best decisions, but her choices are understandable and I’m sympathetic to her situation. She is desperate to be included and to be heard. She wants to trust someone and to be loved. She will have to learn not to trust so easily, I think.
The audiobook did NOT work for me. I would not recommend the audio version. Ana Osorio narrated Together We Burn and she did a great job on that one. But in this story there were a lot of accents needed (French, British, American, Arabic) and the narrator did a poor job with all of them. Her narration came across very young at times, and her own accent varied in degrees of understandability. (“Pulling” sounds like “pooling”, “toward” sounds like “TAH-wrd/TAWr’d”) and a couple times I had to relisten to a word to understand. Not a problem in the other book I’ve listened to that she narrated. I couldn’t tell if there was a grammatical error at one point, or if the narrators voice made an “ed” at the end of a word sound like an “s”.
In Inez’s POV, the majority of the book, the narrator gave Whit’s dialogue an inconsistent British accent that sounded like a bad Australian or Kiwi accent. There was a male narrator for Whit’s POV chapters who was thoroughly British and the difference between his dialogue in Inez’s chapters vs his own narration was jarring. I don’t enjoy multiple narrators for audiobooks or multiple POVs in general.
Whit’s POV chapters were not needed. There were so few of them, and everything we learn about him in them could have been conveyed to the reader in a different way, like through Inez’s interactions with those around them both. I did appreciate how the substance abuse issues were gently touched on. He’s struggling with that, and it’s acknowledged, and it’s also acknowledged that recovery is difficult and relapses happen. I’m not thrilled about the romance aspect
I’ve already requested the next book at my library. I will definitely be reading it!
Minor: Alcoholism and Death of parent